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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Genericrandom
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Oh, that doesn't bode well for someone. And an /excellent/ use of the series' ability to pull souls out of the afterlife. One question, does the escape clause still count? Anyway, /great/ chapter, can't wait to see what's next.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
So did Willow give the wrong guy a soul?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Loatroll
Review:
Great stuff! Looking forward to more. Loved the "Zod kneels before no one" :D
I also like that he was created by Zod.
Looking forward to more!
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from OdinMage
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While I love EVERYTHING you write, this story is amazing, a completely unique idea (like normal from you) and I'm loving how it's spinning.

Keep writing!
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Orchamus
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Ha, this was hilarious, thought the interaction between the Mayor and Xan to be funny....KNEEL BEFORE ZOD!!!
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from darthridian
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woo did xander just gain his soul back?

will be very interesting if he did and if he also gains free will but since the mayor is still around only pretend to follow his orders till he can strike.

keep up the great writing.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Doodle
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Since he didn't play his video games does that mean he's out of the Mayer's control? Or only to a certain extent?

Keep updating!!
Review By [Doodle] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from TheDon
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im sorry to say that i doubted this story for a while. i suspected that somethin like this was happenin but after every chapter i started to lose hope and was just gonna content myself to a mindless, easily controlled(by the evil side) super awesome xander. but im glad to see you come through. xander with doomsdays powers? i get goosebumps thinkin about it. i shoulda known that in your stories xander cant be anything but awesome to the extreme. until next time

-The Don
Review By [TheDon] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Eureka
Review:
Nice update. Would be funny to find out that Willow gave Xander his soul back and that was why the ball broke!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Mcspender
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So the PTB did reacted to change the game, good, good.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from cmdruhura
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Somehow I don't think the 'Go protect her' command can be interpretted as applying only to the Halloween situation.

Xander got the soul???

Since the world wasn't sucked into Hell, Buffy stopped Angelus but was he dusted or sent to Hell.

It will be interesting to see if you have Doomsday's power to adapt and overcome physical adversities to the psychological and magical ones the Mayor has him under.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Morgomir
Review:
Very interesting. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Oh, wow. I was a bit uneasy that 'Xander' was soulless but you solved that pretty nicely. It'll be interesting to see how that affects things in the future. Using your explanations it'd seem one of the reasons Davis Bloome was so insane was the lack of soul so Xander might be able to fight off a compulsion to destroy Clark. Looking forward to the next chapter
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Vilkath
Review:
Nice story, I really like Spike dying. I mean sure he's a fun villian and okay character that has A LOT of fan support... But he was always a bit daft in his plans and often put himself in a lot of danger. The Scoobies killed hell gods and vampires 4 times Spike's age.. why did he always get away alive? No other reason than the author liked him and thought he be fun to use later imo. So it's always nice to see the rare fic willing to kill him off and really change canon events.

I am a bit suprised the Mayor hasn't really caught onto Xander's abilities yet and pushed him to be more powerful. Seems obvious so far from the Mayor's perspective new things hurt Xander far more than things he has already experienced and survived. I would thought some 'training' be done by now to hurt/maim/injure Xander with varous methods to toughen him up against all those forms of attack would been done by now. I know the Mayor doesn't have all the info about Doomsday.. but Xander does now doesn't he? After being possessed by Zod? Will he start hurting himself in ways to become stronger?
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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