I like your story, but I would like it better if it was less New Mutants/Teen Titans and more Xander to read about. Other than that I also like your possible Xander/Willow pairing that should happen when he gets back. I always thought that Xander and Willow get be great together, especially before Willow became so magic obsessed. Keep up the great work.
OK, I have no idea HOW I missed reading this one. GREAT story, PLEASE continue as you are able. I almost fell out of my chair I laughed so much. I copied this one into my archives to reread and I'm putting it in the most funny reread folder, GREAT JOB!!! I'm not yelling that's emphasizing.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I hope they do get to Star Trek eventually, it should be more fun than Gilligan's island. Even if it is interesting to think about why they might be stuck on the Island again. Replicators trump trunks full of cash any day !
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Not sure what happened, but the dialogue and jokes improved dramatically about halfway through what you've written so far.
Great banter while preserving the base personalities yet allowing additional exploration.
However, I'm afraid that the prank they just pulled on Fisk comes off as a bit too beneficial to him...so I can't really classify it as a prank. Now if the hair kept regrowing the instant it was cut by the barber...that would be a different situation entirely.
Definitely a fun story (although the recurring theme of "Hentai tentacles" may be just a teeny tiny bit over emphasized).
Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
They thought he shaved his head and liked it that way, which is canon. I decided to be nice to him.
Review By [draconis] • Date [29 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Man, this fanfic keeps getting better and better. Fisk growing a crapload of hair all over him, with an afro and a huge freaking forest of pubes is funny as hell. Hope you add more soon!
Review By [Selias] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I can see that Xander wants to get home, but is also having way too much fun to be in a hurry about it. The idea that Avengers are pranksters - or at least a number of them are in their down time is fun. I also liked idea that the King Pin, given something that he never thought he would have, can take a break from obsessive crime planning and have some fun.
The on going joke of magical sex including tentacles is fun in an adult way. And I'm glad you chose the Marvel Universe where most people have a sense of humor.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Not Rated