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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Dragonelf
Review:
You did a great job with this series. :D

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Comments from author:
Thank-you.

D.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Rather a very good series! Am a bit dismayed that it's come to an end.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [17 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from RafMereC
Review:
Loved the surprise ending.
I was thinking Highlander all the way to the end.

Great job.

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much.

DaveT.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from burmafrdnow
Review:
ok. Mary Sue time.
Comments from author:
Huh?

DaveT.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
Queen Victoria??.
Albert, like the sex toy???.
Whooaah dude, this is quite quite mind bending stuff dude =D.
Congratulations for such a cool series =).

See ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Cheers,

Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Queen Victoria... Riiiiight... Backs away carefully...
Comments from author:
Well, it was either her or someone like Shiva!

Dave.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from burmafrdnow
Review:
Lived in England for a while some years ago. They have several organizations there that have the get out of jail free card. Any cop that does not check on that number gets a very large billy club stuck sideways up a very uncomfortable place. So frankly I have a great deal of doubt that they would be that stupid. And as a matter of fact anything involved disapears from the files as well. So there is no point. Any cop with a brain knows this.
Comments from author:
I've lived in England nearly all my life...and I think you've got it a little the wrong way round. Just at the moment the police seem to me able to get away with murder or at least manslaughter. Anyway that's real life this is fiction.

A 'get out of jail free' card is only as good as the people in charge want it to be.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
That's actually a rather clever thing Silvia did, giving them what they want; lets see just how long they can hold her until the big wigs find out.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Yes, things are about to change.

Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Well, so much for Sylvia. Hope they can get along without her.
Comments from author:
I wouldn't count her out just yet!

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Mcspender
Review:
Bwah hahahaha!!!.
The great battle against the forces of evil that wasn't :P.
They should have used a GPS.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
You know if Lord Hassledorf catches you disrespectfully referring to him without using his full title for an entire scene, you could be in just as much trouble as Mr Hacker, next life.
Comments from author:
OMG! You're right! I better go and sacrifice some goats! NO! Not goats...you know I've no idea what he likes...virgins maybe? Very hard to find around London.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Mcspender
Review:
Hehehehe, the Hoff telling Hacker to spill the beans was priceless =D!!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Mcspender
Review:
Ya killed da Clangers... you're mean... you meanie =P!!!!!.

Seriously, the girls are kinda overzealous in the taking care of weird things department, methinks they should find a less violent hobby (or a hubby=P), like joining an amateur rugby league, or a demolition crew or chocking chickens in a Chinese restaurant.

And the thing with the goats... now that's a snowball effect from hell. Hacker should've sold the meat to a mexican restaurant to make a delicious birria. Believe me, a goat birria it's a gift from the gods themselves after a nasty hangover =).

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, why would a Minister of the Crown buy goats on expenses, slaughter them then sell them to a Halal Butcher (or whatever)? That's even more suspicious than what I wrote!

Don't worry everything killed by slayers in this fic is secretly evil...honest...remember the Wombles!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Valandar
Review:
I always thought the "Don't Kill Humans", as excused in many fanfics I've read (and not officially in Canon) was that the way the Slayers' mindset was organized, was if they killed a human, it gave them a sort of Blue Screen Of Death. They were in shock (see Buffy "killing" Ted the first time, Faith killing the Deputy Mayor), and they either managed to "reboot" safely (such as when Buffy realized Ted was a robot), or unless given proper support snappped for a while (re Faith).

Also... don't these two "underemployed slayers" realize some of these demons MIGHT be potential allies?
Comments from author:
I think there was some mention of Slayers not killing humans is in canon somewhere, but I couldn't say which episode.

Killing your first human is pretty traumatic whether you're a Slayer or a 'normal' human being and particularly if you're a teenage girl. So I think slayers could kill humans if they needed to.

Its a well know fact that 'Clangers' are scum of the universe, a military dictatorship that is out to take over the universe. Look up 'Clangers' on you-tube you'll see I'm right!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from burmafrdnow
Review:
Need to explain about the 'code five'. And remember this is a BTVS universe unless you are modifying it. The only other vamps that were different were the Turok Hans.
Comments from author:
And Dracula and...

I always thought that as there different races of people there could be different races of vamp. The vamps that Buffy fought in SunnyD were, Common North American Vampires as opposed to the Common European Vampire and so on.

Code Five vampires come from a Channel 4 (UK TV) series called 'Ultra Violet'. Code Five Vampires (what are Code 1,2,3 or 4?) are very dangerous. They think, they're rich and are out for world domination they also explode when they get staked!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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