Great job on the new chapter, I hope you'll add more soon.
-Got a few suggestions for personalities Xander could get: Spider-Man, Deadpool, Superman, Batman, Doctor Strange, Ghost Rider, The Punisher, Wolverine, Daredevil, Elektra, Mr. Fantastic, Human Torch, The Thing, Invisible Woman, Green Lantern, Iron Man, Marvel's Thor, Indiana Jones, Natasha Romanoff(Black Widow).
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A pleasure to see the Decepticons get the smackdown they deserve. Xander certainly got through a bunch of Avatars in this chapter! lol at Jack pushing him out of the plane - He would totally do that! And the NID stymied again :( I don't know how they thought they would contain Xander anyway... So now Xander has his own superteam travelling around the world, where he can be whoever is needed. Comic con is the perfect place to start!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
heh, any one of the autobots that showed up would be swamped by any and all mecha enthusiasts. it could be seen as either a publicity stunt or something along similar lines or even some fan with a really really really really really good costume and way too much money on his hands. although i have to wonder if xander will end up assuming the persona of various different robotics geniuses and such. reed richards and tony stark to name just a couple.... could make some cool stuff.
Review By [shakeval] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Great chapter. Intreasting idea would be for zander to pick up Admiral Willam Adama of BSG and the Galactica to show up repaired and useable after the Avatar experence. It would shut O'Neil up about big space guns
Review By [markuop] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Brilliant!! Didn't see the Transformers coming, to be honest, but now I realize it fits nicely.
As to the agents watching Xander, I think Faith would be an excellent start - if not the only real choice - for the Counsel, while SG's could be Doc Frazier to start - since that allows Dr. Lam to be introduced back in the Mountain - for both adult supervision, medical assistance (face it, Xander and any bodyguard he gets'll need her), and the possibilities of her getting some Xander lurvin' :^)........
OK I'm back from my little dreamscape (ahem)
And for the Transformers, they need a fairly large vehicle for the people and the extra weapons - maybe Ironhide, as he was a fairly big truck, IIRC...
And now back to my Xander, Faith, Janice daydream........ :^O
Review By [trongod] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated
I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Just to see what Xander goes as and Optimus' reaction. Great chapter. Love NID trashing. It is like shooting up Nazis.
Review By [grd] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
