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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Rob
Review:
Very cool. He even comes with tools. :)

Rob
Comments from author:
Yeah he's like an action figure, comes with accessories. Collect the complete set!
Review By [Rob] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from WolfWriter
Review:
I'm thinking he turned into Wolverine to take out the Goa'uld the first time. Considering Wolvie's past, and all the crap done to him, there's no way he'd let a bunch of snakey smelling god wannabe's take him captive; so...he tore them to shreds...literally.

God help to Goa'uld if he turns into Superman.....or Batman....or Obi-Wan Kenobi (I'd love to see Sam get her hands on a lightsaber!)

The Goa'uld would all run away in droves, crying for their mommies.
Comments from author:
Very very close for Wolverine but not quite right.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
Interesting! Does those looks mean that Jack just got volunteered?
Review By [kayron] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Needless to say, he was a lot more with the Riddick then the Cap facing the goa'uld, so this is going to be bad.

Leftover from the Hyena and Halloween, or something else?
Comments from author:
Actually no. This for once has no connection to either Halloween or the Hyena.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
Review:
heehee :)
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great opening for the megaverse's playtoy.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
What a completely different concept. Cool! Keep it up!
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tremerid
Review:
Very well done author-person :). I liked this one alot, and I will definitely keep an eye out for more. I, like at least one other reviewer hope that Xander begins to recall, or maybe even ride in the passenger(viewing, if not participating)seat during his posessions.

I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next.

Regards,

--Tremerid
Comments from author:
Ah you sort have hit the nail on the head so to speak but you'll have to wait to find out.
Review By [tremerid] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Doodle
Review:
Is the President going to know who he(Xander, remember he and the Scoobies got a high level of clearance because of the whole Initiative thing) is, and if he does, are the SGC going to get yelled at for basically kidnapping him and keeping him captive?
Review By [Doodle] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Riniko
Review:
Interesting story idea, but I don't think the SG are quite right about Xander. He was Captain America that time, but Captain America would not have taken the Goa’uld down in that bloody a fashion. So, I am guessing that the next avatar will be different too, it seems more like Xander brings up what is needed for each change. I do hope that he begins to remember what happens as blacking out and not knowing what happened to you each time would really be sad.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
This is great! I really hope you continue it! I wonder what's gonna happen when the scoobies finally find him and when he finds out that they lied to him about telling them where he is?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slmncpm
Review:
hahahaha i love it! *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rob
Review:
Looks good so far.
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from daveykins
Review:
Interesting so far... looking forward to more :)
Review By [daveykins] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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