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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AzrielSunHawk
Review:
*ROTFL* that was really funny. :D
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Now this is a start to a story that I can't recall ever seeing before. ;-)

Like the way that Jack and Janet just assumed that what Xander referred to as 'magic' is simply some sort of unfamiliar super-technology they haven't come across yet.

I'm looking forward to seeing how they react when nothing they can do convinces Xander that the high tech they do know isn't the same thing, and he continues to insist that magic does exist. ;-)

Still don't see why Willow would put a spell like that on Xander, but I'm waiting for your explanation.

Good beginning.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DCG
Review:
Well thats an interesting start. Looking forward to more.
Review By [DCG] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Intriguing set up and amazing dialog. O'Neill and Xander run the gamut from cute to hysterical.

The reactions are great. From the security guard, to the hazmat guy, then O'Neill and Janet - so very 'just another day at the office'.

Can't wait for more.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rogue
Review:
Now this is definitely a new way for a crossover to start, good to see something different. I love how you did the interaction between the two, very in character. I also like the way you had O'neill and Janet react to the magic thing, very matter of fact taking it at face value until they know more. No denying it immediately or even just accepting it right away without proof. A very nice balance. Can't wait to see what direction you are going to take this in.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I hope I can continue the good work. The next ch will be out next Sat.
Review By [Rogue] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet work
Comments from author:
Ch 2 will be out next Sat
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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