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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from mwinter
Review:
Finally Hawklan has come back to the building! thanks for the update. Awaiting more. Just hope the wait isn't as long as the last one.
Comments from author:
no promises here...sadly the time I have for fanfic is not very much
Review By [mwinter] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I am so looking forward to reading more of this exciting story!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the update, I hope you will be adding more to this story soon.

-When will we find out the changes that were/will be made?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Elleria
Review:
Love this. So happy to see an update.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Narf
Review:
Nice update. Keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful, its back!
I went back and re-read the whole series to remember exactly what was going on but what a great chapter, what a great series, I love it!
Comments from author:
Yeah sorry took quite a while, but thank your linking it. Found it kinda hard to write and wasn't to sure about the result. Luckily reviews were quite positive so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [20 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Great chapter. As others have noted, there are a number of spelling opsies but overall a great new chapter. It's nice to see both Dumbledore and the wizarding world take some shots over the quality of the schooling at Hogwarts take their shots. That and someone pointing out Dumbledore's general idiocy is always fun. Wonder if Albus and Tom will be meeting up at the pub soon to have a pint and bitch about the changes that are happening?
Comments from author:
yeah spelling problems can happen if unbetaed, my fault I didn't want to let you all wait longer than I already had :)

hmm the last one sound like a fun idea, maybe for a omake or so :)
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from KageRyu
Review:
What I don't get is a while back you said that Xander hated the word muggle. So why would he allow his fiance to use it in front of him and not to mention Faith wouldn't know the word to begin with seeing has before this story she has never been to a European magical alley.
Comments from author:
locks like you caught me there :) That would be a case of Author error. Fixed it to non-wizard hope that's better
Review By [KageRyu] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Minor spelling error. You used rapid instead of rabid. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing, surprising and totally great chapter! :)
Go Xander and the board!
Eager to see which further changes are made. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from moringstar
Review:
Thanks for the update.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from juniorsamples
Review:
I had forgotten about this one. So glad it did not fall by the wayside. I know you have other projects but I am eagerly awaiting more.
Comments from author:
yeah was shocked a bit myself to see I needed 14 months for ch 7....shame on me
Review By [juniorsamples] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from ChaosLady
Review:
Whoa. That's an epic meeting.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from AkashaDrake
Review:
Need to watch spelling and word choices. This last chapter needs a good bit of editing for readability.

otherwise, though, an excellent continuation. Can't wait until the next chapter
Comments from author:
as said this is not beta read so far. will replace it asap
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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