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Review of chapter "The Part Where It's a Trap" from (Current Donor)Ravanne
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Love it, this so needs a sequel.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ravanne] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from starwolf
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that was great. you have a ending point or a starting point if you want to go farther. so are there any lil' Faith's running around the black.
good one, if you write more of this i'll read it. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from chrysanthemum
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Awesome story. Write a sequel? My pleading face is on full force.
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from bradsan
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Still like the series and hoping for more. One thing crossed my mind. How did Faith explained to Mal that she didn't aged before he knew the story. Just wondering.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from bookworm
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I seem to be leaving a lot of reviews like this, but...great series! I'd love to see more of this one some day, too.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from BrownFinderth
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I appreciate jedibuttercup adding this story onto the series!!! The interaction between Buffy, Faith and Mal is very heartwarming!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from bradsan
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more please. You can't do that ending like this. I know you can but please don't.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from sdavidm
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Oh no! Not complete! Its just about to get good. I'm now doubly curious about Council and revolution business intersecting, and how much the Alliance knows about the supernatural.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from LetsRandom
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Love this series and I hope that you add more to it!
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
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great so far can't wait for more
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from Discord
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Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next.
Review By [Discord] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from RevDorothyL
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I especially appreciated the bit about Buffy loving her son even if he DID turn out to be evil and some sort of reincarnation of Caleb, 'cause he's still her flesh and blood, and her sister and mother's flesh and blood.

And am I correct in thinking that perhaps PATIENCE is Buffy's daughter from an earlier union who also survived the war? No wonder she and Mal have trouble getting along, even if they don't know of their half-sibling relationship!
Comments from author:
This isn't the first story I've implied he's reincarnated in. But that doesn't mean he's evil *now*. Just a little disconcerting to someone who's met them both.

And: hee. There is that implication, yes. I wondered if anyone would connect up the mention of Whitehall. =)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breath and Shadow" from Gideon
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Great chapter. I wonder how much Buffy will tell him. I guess knowing about her can't make the alliance hate him more, right?
I feel so sorry for Buffy, having to leave children behind again and again, but I can understand why she does it.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Separates Heroes" from sdavidm
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Great part! I truly hope you continue this series. It's very intriguing.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Separates Heroes" from RevDorothyL
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I do so hope there'll be another chapter of this someday.

Meanwhile, I especially like the way you worked a bit of the "Hero of Canton" lyrics into the chapter title AND how appropriate that turned out to be, given the way their reunion was going (and the reasons for Mal being allowed to think his mother dead for the past ten years).

The cover story requiring Jayne and Faith to 'pretend' to be an item (and Jayne's self-sacrificing willingness to play along) was another delightful touch.
Comments from author:
Well, there are nearly two weeks left of the August ficathon, right? =)

The chapter title was very intentional that way; I'm glad someone picked up on it. *grin* I usually have trouble with titles, but as soon as I had Mal quoting that other bit to himself, there it was.

Jayne+Faith wasn't originally in the picture, either. But it was so much fun to put that detail in! And it let me involve more of the cast than just a Buffy and Mal confrontation.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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