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Review of chapter "What Separates Heroes" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I do so hope there'll be another chapter of this someday.

Meanwhile, I especially like the way you worked a bit of the "Hero of Canton" lyrics into the chapter title AND how appropriate that turned out to be, given the way their reunion was going (and the reasons for Mal being allowed to think his mother dead for the past ten years).

The cover story requiring Jayne and Faith to 'pretend' to be an item (and Jayne's self-sacrificing willingness to play along) was another delightful touch.
Comments from author:
Well, there are nearly two weeks left of the August ficathon, right? =)

The chapter title was very intentional that way; I'm glad someone picked up on it. *grin* I usually have trouble with titles, but as soon as I had Mal quoting that other bit to himself, there it was.

Jayne+Faith wasn't originally in the picture, either. But it was so much fun to put that detail in! And it let me involve more of the cast than just a Buffy and Mal confrontation.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Separates Heroes" from kittenpoker
Review:
Again, with the I-should-be-doing-something-else-but-am-so-addicted. Loved it, and am eagerly waiting for more in the same 'verse!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Separates Heroes" from Gideon
Review:
That has got to be weird for him, seeing his mother again when she should be ten years dead and she looks *younger* than he remembers? She is gonna have to tell him a whole heap more truth now to explain things and even then I don't think he will be happy. I don't know what Zoe could be thinking about now but she must be having serious doubts about meeting Mal's mother considering Buffy looks younger than she does herself!
I wonder what River will say when she meets Buffy?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Separates Heroes" from dreameralways
Review:
I look forward to Mal's reaction to the truth. Still interesting and thanks for the update.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Separates Heroes" from Discord
Review:
Will there be explainations next?
Review By [Discord] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long-Delayed Reunion" from kittenpoker
Review:
So I'm on lunch break and saw this update...but then I had to go back and re-read the shorts before it, and now I'm going to be late going back, but it was totally worth it. Honestly I had completely forgotten about this verse but after re-reading it I'm in love with it again. Please continue!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long-Delayed Reunion" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Joss was just showing off; if you look at his history and how he acts it had nothing to do with anything so high minded.
Comments from author:
Fortunately, we the fans don't always have to consider authorial intention. I personally like the texture the language crossover creates, and intend to be as realistic about implementing it as possible. (Language key now included, FYI.)
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long-Delayed Reunion" from dreameralways
Review:
You really need to continue this soon. It is very entertaining. Mal will learn that not only did his mom and aunt work for a secret organization but so did Book. And both Mal and River may now be at the center of the coming storm. Should be interesting and I can't wait.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long-Delayed Reunion" from Discord
Review:
Hehehe. I liked Jayne's POV. Hope there will be another installment of this story :)
Review By [Discord] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long-Delayed Reunion" from burmafrdnow
Review:
One reason I never lliked Serenity or Firefly was that Joss just had to show off with all the stupid chinese crap and other dumb words. Another reason Firefly never was all that much.
Comments from author:
Okaaaay. I prefer to think of it less as "showing off" and more as "actual world-building and not assuming our culture and language will be the same", which I appreciated. If that's your way of saying, "I'd appreciate a language key", it would have come off a lot less small-minded that way. (I didn't realize my tooltip translation code failed to cross over, and I'd have appreciated *that*.)
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long-Delayed Reunion" from Gideon
Review:
So far that meeting is a good bit calmer than I would have expected, but I guess they are still in public.
I wonder what Buffy told Mal when he was growing up to explain her lack of aging?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long-Delayed Reunion" from Wrytergrrrl
Review:
You can't leave it there! Not there when they've just met up again! EVIL!!! :) Great job but now you need to write more more more!
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five By Five, Sister" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
god i want to see mal and crew actually meet buffy and faith

please please continue this
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [9 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five By Five, Sister" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
god i want to see mal and crew actually meet buffy and faith

please please continue this
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [9 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five By Five, Sister" from PrincessAudrii
Review:
I really like this series, the whole Ancient Slayers idea and the way Faith and Buffy act and interact and their motives behind their actions is really intriguing. I would love to see more in the future.
Review By [PrincessAudrii] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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