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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Orchamus
Review:
Neat.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from TheDon
Review:
xanders gonna get some awesome abilities right? or atleast some crazy training so he can be like an awesome batman(minus the broodiness)
Comments from author:
His awesome abilities will probably have a lot to do with being in much better shape and having massively improved stamina.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Jonakhensu
Review:
I'm fairly sure the Virtues would use a hot instead. I doubt there'd be any competition involved.
Review By [Jonakhensu] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Point of View" from tactless
Review:
Another possibility for the Watcher not wanting a slayer to be part of a hunting team is that with the huge distances involved in traveling the world, the only way to get a slayer, who, say is in Germany, to, say, China, if there is an emergency would be to kill the original one and hope (which would be a fair bet if slayers are called where they're needed) that one pops up in China.

EDIT: Well...The Watchers seemed to pretty much look as the slayers at weapons and really when you need a sword, it's better to have a dull sword than no sword at all. (shiver)
Comments from author:
That's a disturbing idea all on its own. Fortunately the time needed to train a new slayer makes it unfeasible or the Watchers would probably have done it.
Review By [tactless] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Difdi
Review:
Tactless raises a nasty but plausible point. After all, if you really NEED a heavy hitter somewhere right away, an untrained slayer backed by a hunter team is probably better than just the hunter team. Granted, a trained slayer backing a hunter team would be better still, but if the choice is between untrained slayer and world goes bye-bye? Definitely plausible.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CLIFF
Review:
I really enjoy this story. Can not wait to see more of it along with your other stories. With team X, Xander should change his name to Charlie.
Review By [CLIFF] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ChiVayne
Review:
I'm quite enjoying this. I hope to see more, but really I'll still be happy if you move on to something new or update one of your other stories.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Greywizard
Review:
With the introduction of Team X, this has just jumped to become my very most favorite story of yours, and possibly of all time and of anyone else I read! ;-)

More, please?
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from LFW
Review:
I am totally enjoying this fic.
More please
One question, the Powerpuffs Girls names are great code names(and really amusing) but shouldn't the girls get 'real' names? (lack of a better term)
Thanks again
Review By [LFW] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Thank you so much for an outstanding update. And so quickly, too! You are officially My Hero. I am now wondering how many Dawns are going to be showing up someday? Hummmmm.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from darthridian
Review:
lol, talk about chaos. hmm i wonder if the serum will ever get perfected or if Xander uses it it has a few extra effects because of his previous possesions, strength from the Primal and a counter to the no fear thing because of the Soldier.

well keep up the good work mate and hope to read more soon.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Adrian
Review:
As always, brilliant and funny.

This idea would make an excellent serious story as well though.
Review By [Adrian] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from dazeddan
Review:
this story rocks, i don't know if i should laugh , cry, or wish i was xander.
Review By [dazeddan] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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