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Review of chapter "Daddy?" from twlight
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Oh My God. you got both Willow and Abby babble perfect, I love it. This is a wonderful start to what should be a wonderful story. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from Lucinda
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Gotta love those moments of open mouth, insert foot.... at least as long as you aren't the one tasting foot.


This seems to be off to an interesting start.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from spk
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I LOVE NCIS crossovers. Very nice start to the story. Everyone seems so in-character. Can't wait to see where you take this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from littleoldme
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Oh, I really love this idea! Gibbs with a post-addiction Willow. He'll still want to be all alpha dad-like, but she's been on her own for so long...
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from CPTSkip
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Lovely start to your story. You do a great Abby. I look forward to seeing where your story goes and just what Gibbs is going to do with another daughter. A living one at that.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from Greywizard
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Like all your characterizations, and you nailed both Willow and Abby dead on with the almost stream-of-consciousness chatter/babbling. ;-)

You also caught Tony pretty much dead-on with the 'ignoring the guy to focus on possibly flirting with the pretty girl, as long as she's not a suspect' aspect of his personality, and Xander moving to negate that immediately, since it's circumspect to the reason they're there, made me laugh. ;-)

I also liked how you showed Gibbs' stare didn't faze Xander in the slightest since, in a situation like this when he's supporting Willow, he wouldn't let anything bother him in the slightest if it might cause one of his friends any sort of discomfort.

Your description of Willow's parents' personalities is probably one of the most reasonable explanations I've ever seen offered, so kudos for that.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from AllenPitt
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very interesting,most stories like this take place much earlier in Willow's life. Talk about having a lot to tell him once the results come in.
So this is in effect very early in season 7; they might have blind/mute people with knives attacking people soon.. maybe the NCIS would get involved in that if a naval angle is involved...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from eriktheviking
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Great fun read, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from DireSquirrel
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Interesting start. I look forward to more.
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from mariposa
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Very very cool storyline
Review By [mariposa] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from MaabConnor
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this is a really fun start!
Review By [MaabConnor] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from DarthPayne
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Oh my god, i can totally see Abby doing that.

Lol, great start.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from purrfus
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Fun.

Abby is especially lovely.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from naraic
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Brilliant story.

You have good characterization. Your Abby is amazingly accurate and I can just see her and her lab as I read this and hear her talk its amazing. Your Tony what little there is of him is well written and really in character.

Your Xander Gibbs and Willow are quality fanfiction characterization.

Nice concept too. Top quality fic.
Review By [naraic] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Daddy?" from AngusH
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Yes!

Brilliant start, I really loved that scene with Abby in that Lab at the end. Poor Willow to learn of her situation by overhearing the argument though.

Looking forward to the next chapter very much.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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