Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Laws of Combat" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Yeah, I see how it is. Xander will "spar" with several Jaffa over a few days and just when they're at their most confused and figure they lnow all his skills, someone will snap and really try to kill him. That's when he'll take them down in one (distracted) move and his eyes will glow 'hyena' green and REALLY freak them out.
Comments from author:
An interesting and likely strategy...
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review By [neovente] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Interlude of Madness!!!" from garrycooper
Review:
I must say I did laugh. This is a very good story. I'm glad I found it again, as I forgot to mark it for tracking. I hope you will finish healing and sorry about your grandfather. I definatly wasn't expecting a looney tunes intervention.
Comments from author:
I got some complaints about that but it was supposed to be completely random and funny. My healing is sorta working but with a head wound continuing damage has been proven to be able to happen for as long as a decade after the initial wound & I've had 3 in the last 5 or was that 6 years? So still trying to re-route my brain in a way that wont keep falling apart. I've even been banned from driving again for the most part. Very annoying.
I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I've just posted ch 49!
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Not Rated
hahaha can´t wait for him to tare the Tokra a new one and then find out Hostes is gone. Almost makes me feel sorry for the people he´s going to take his revenge/bad mood on.
Comments from author:
poor Xander *snicker* I have little to no sympathy for those who he gets pointed at for the death of Hostess
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
