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Review of chapter "Recriminations" from eriktheviking
A great comeback for the real deal Cordelia.
Comments from author:
She's awesome, ain't she?

Glad you're enjoying her!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Recriminations" from kyzhart
Powerfully written. Can't wait to see her and Xan's reunion.
Comments from author:
I hope it will be worth the wait!

Thanks for reading!
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Recriminations" from frankocsic
i can't wait for cordy's reunion with xander. great storytelling.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story!
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Recriminations" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
This is beyond good. This has strong potential to be great. The writing is good, the characters are well drawn, and for the most part, I see no bashing... I see a very angry Cordy calling it as she sees it. As long as there are consequences for the ruffled feathers she's messing up, and she doesn't become 'ms I'm right about everything and I can tell you off incessantly' she's wonderful. I missed her bitch side as they pushed it in the background. She was needed to tell the truths... I can't believe they did what they did to her. It was character assassination. Thanks for an intelligent an insightful take on Cordy and her return. Guard against making her a *paragon*, and you'll have a hit on your hands!

My only complaint is the disclaimers and apologies at the beginning. You should have the courage of your convictions, and write the characters the way you see them, and damn the torpedoes... especially since you write the way you do. Don't apologize for your writing decisions. You've got talent.

Comments from author:
Don't worry, this won't be perfect!Cordy ragging on everyone else. She made her own choices, some of them bad, and she acknowledges them, and she will try to get the others to recognize their own poor choices as well.

What they did to her in 'You're Welcome'...there are no words. They completely assassinated her character in the fourth season, and to bring her back for that one-off was not only insulting to the character and to Charisma Carpenter, but to all of the fans. And don't even get me started on what they did to Fred. For a world which is based predominantly on strong women, Whedon & Co. certainly felt the need to kill most of them off.

As Willow once said, a vague disclaimer is no one's friend. Personally, I feel that authors should warn appropriately for their work. I certainly utilize warnings in both my writing *and* my reading. I'm not a fan of certain characters and pairings, so I don't read stories which feature them strongly. I don't like certain tropes, so I avoid fics which use them. I find warnings helpful when I'm deciding what to read, and so I try to do the same for my audience.

I certainly wasn't apologizing for anything, not for my writing decisions nor my vision for the story. I've been writing fanfic for ten years, and was flamed consistently during the first four because people didn't like my interpretations of canon and of the characters. I didn't care then, I don't care now. My skin is pretty thick.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Recriminations" from Bobboky
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Recriminations" from xxmagex
Hmmm, interested in seeing what happens when Cordy arrives in Rome. Things will happen!!
Comments from author:
Why, of course they will! It's Cordelia, after all. ;)
Review By [xxmagex] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Recriminations" from zTiamaTz
Another great chapter with Cordelia on a roll. You're very accurate with the details too, there are some thing in there that I forgot all about.

After reading some of the reviews, one in particular comes to mind, I see why you write Cordelia so well.

I look forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!

As for the reviews, well, there was one by a person who goes out of their way to be torturous. If they weren't so pathetic, I'd pity them. Instead, I just laugh.

And Cordy's always been my muse. I just adore her. *hugs her tightly*

Glad you're enjoying the story! :D
Review By [zTiamaTz] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Recriminations" from Cmiller
I can't wait to see Cordy bitchslap Willow and Buffy. I also kind of want to see Faith move to the side to let Cordy in to see Xander and when asked say something along the lines of not wanting to pick a fight with the Queen.
Comments from author:
I think you've been looking at my notes...
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from Tjin
yeah... that sounds like Cordellia.
Comments from author:
Doesn't it just? ;)

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Tjin] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from Stormrider
Now this is what the episode "You're Welcome" should've been. I liked the episode, the last10 min of the episode I didn't like. This is going to be fun. The other viewers are right. Cordy is the only person that can give the angel crew and the Scooby gang, the reality check they need. This will be good. Hurricane Cordy is on the loose, hell have no fury over anyone that gets in her way. I love to see what happens not to mention how Angel and co. react to this (especially Cordy calling Spike a rapist) Good start love to see what you do next
Comments from author:
I so agree. Those last ten minutes were all kinds of WTF. I can't even bring myself to watch them anymore.

Thank you so much for your support. It's very much appreciated! And LMFAO @ 'Hurricane Cordy'. Truer words were never spoken! XD
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Steps" from wjenks
Wow this is fantastic. Love how you brought Cordy in full queen mode out to play.Cant wait till the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I miss Queen!Cordy, and couldn't resist the opportunity to have some fun with her. Hope you like what's to come!
Review By [wjenks] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Steps" from uten
Very nice start.

I like the idea of Cordelia coming back to give everyone a wake up call. It's definitely in character as is her extremely blunt way of dealing with things. It's also obvious the fang gang won't let her walk away without explaining that last comment, and I am quite curious who else she has to deal with in Wolfram & Hart.

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I think the show really suffered in Cordelia's absence, so this is just my little way of remedying that. I'm so happy that so many are willing to take this ride with me! ^^

As for who else she has to deal with, well, it's coming soon! ;)
Review By [uten] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Steps" from DHX
so this is where you've been hiding Xanzpet! i was wondering where you got to! oh and pay no attention to JasonBarnett he's a buffy apologist that attacks any perceived bashing/threat to his perfect world view of buffy. and rescue is just as good as i remembered, still hoping for more Legacy and Forced though
Comments from author:
*waves* Here I am! ;)

Oh, I'm familiar with JasonBarnett. I think he's rather comical. :D

Legacy and Forced will eventually make their way here, never fear! Thanks so much for all of your support! :)
Review By [DHX] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Steps" from JasonBarnett
carefully constructed arguements designed as you say just come off as second guessing not considering the fact people were dealing in times of stress. For example Wes didn't go to Cordy because she'd become very pro-Angel and was distracted by the Groosalug. Using those arguements come off rather like you described Willow, "arguing before the Supreme Court"
Comments from author:
To quote my Cordelia: "Oh. It's you."

I had hoped that my interactions with you had ceased after your ridiculous harassment of me on and INAP, but alas. It's quite obvious that you and I have very different views of the shows, which begs the question as to why you continually seek out and badger authors who have opinions which stray from your own. If you don't like something, don't read it. Fanfiction is derivative by nature; it's not canon. Rather, it is the authors' *interpretations* of the shows and its characters. If you want to attack a story because of poor grammar or misspellings, that's one thing, but to attack the very premise simply because you disagree with it - despite that you were given very clear warnings in the notes as to what you may expect? That's pathetic.

I don't care for your stories, so I don't bother reading them, and I certainly don't waste my time or yours by reviewing them. This sandbox is more than large enough for everyone who wants to play, and I frankly have no interest in playing with you. If you feel the need to continue reviewing my stories, by all means, feel free. Just know that I will be ignoring you. Of course, for you, being ignored is nothing new.

Have a great day! :D
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from Neverwillmini
No one can beat Cordelia Chase for sheer impact. Nice start, I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. Much appreciated! :D
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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