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Review of chapter "Forming the Portal" from RHatch
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glad you updated...
Review By [RHatch] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forming the Portal" from mendal
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The only one that comes to mind is Ezekiel Stone from Brimstone
Comments from author:
Possible, but unlikely; the kind of Hell Stone went to doesn't fit my 'vision' of the afterlife structure I'm using here.
Review By [mendal] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Plan of Attack" from RHatch
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good chappie....
Review By [RHatch] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talk With a Stranger" from RHatch
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Merry Christmas to ME!!!!!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [25 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talk With a Stranger" from banditobane
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I said it once and I'll say it again, Kratos of God of War. Also I just finished playing Dante's Inferno, that Dante would be an interesting addition even it would get confusing between him and Dante from DMC.
Comments from author:
The suggestion's something to think about, even if I'm ambiguous about bringing in a god-level combatant; maybe the Coven will find him in Hell when they get there...
Review By [banditobane] • Date [25 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Recruitment Drive" from RHatch
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Interesting team
Review By [RHatch] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Temptation of the Coven" from CamrynLee
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Hmm, I have been following your series with interest from the beginning and I have liked it very much, but damn! you said character death not character annihilation... And yeah, while I agree that Satan probably wouldn't care about the age of the beings he killed, I do question two things: 1) Destroying so many strong beings of light at once must really wreck havoc on the balance and probably cause Heaven to act to restore it and/or giving so much spiritual power to the light by returning so many of it's strongest warriors to the essence of the light, so why take the chance ; and 2)as we learned from Kayser Soze, killing everything a person has to live for is not a good idea when they still are fighting you and I think Satan has probably realized this by now. I think it might have made more sense to leave more of them alive but for whatever reason(s) unable to in anyway connect to the battle being fought to participate or to lend aid. However, what's done is done, so onto possible members of the Coven; my first thoughts were Damon Hellstrom aka the Son of Satan and Coyote (from Eclipse Comics and interestingly enough Todd McFarland was involved with the book). Also interesting could be Bob or Thomas from the Dresden Files, or for that matter Harry himself. Also, you have the possibilities of InuYasha and/or Sesshomaru from InuYasha, and Deadman or the Phantom Stranger (one possible - and the most plausible --origin for whom was a fallen Angel) from DC comics. From Marvel comes Jack Russell, the Werewolf by Night and Brother/Doctor Voodoo, Jericho Drumm. There are also Belgarath or Polgara and Durnik from the Begariad. Lastly, I swear I would write a poem about you if you included Granny Weatherwax from Discworld!
Comments from author:
Given the power he's packing as a result of gaining a foothold in this Earth, Satan's not that concerned about any 'disruption' to the balance as he now possesses so much raw power that there's comparitively little anyone else can do against him.

Still, glad you liked the drama of what happened, and I'll try and keep a few of your suggestions in mind; I've got some of the 'main' candidates for 'reserve Coven membership' planned out, but it's possible that I could use the Phantom Stranger to bring in some others (Although Granny Weatherwax isn't possible; she's too far-removed from all the others to get involved in this conflict).

Hope you enjoy the rest of this story,

Marcus
Review By [CamrynLee] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Temptation of the Coven" from banditobane
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Awesome! And I have a suggestion for the team, Kratos from the 'God of War' trilogy, someone with ability to kill a Greek God would be a be a kick ass addition.
Review By [banditobane] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Temptation of the Coven" from Eureka
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KICK his Ass!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "After the Fall" from mendenbar
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I like your Coven a little better with each chapter and each re-reading.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "After the Fall" from Eureka
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OK I know you said character death here, but ALL of them except Paige, Red, and Faith? Not nice! You killed off babies for goodness sake!

True, he wouldn't... but still couldn't you have left a lil more help for the guys?
Comments from author:
We're dealing with Satan himself; he's not exactly going to care about things like that
Review By [Eureka] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "After the Fall" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
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Loved the story... great birthday present!
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Launching the Assault" from Eureka
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Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope Buffy knows fire is the only way to kill those things...
Review By [Eureka] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Launching the Assault" from JasonBarnett
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I don't know Hellboy to say anything, but Paige could orb back and Buffy is strong enough to throw a desk(which if this is an office as it seems she should have) I think. At the very least she slammed one into Xander way back in season 1.

So it's kind of a massive brain freeze here.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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