Review of chapter "Stupid Magical Contract!" from
MistofRainbowsReview:
Okay, I think this story needs another story to follow that details the marriage and how Hermione intends to take over the world in a non evil way. Possibly by being related to royalty and using some obscure law to get things put back in her hands after some horrible accident befalls the royal family. Still it would be interesting to see how they pull things off. :)
Comments from author:
Well, I actually messed up, this wasn't supposed to be marked as a one shot. It really wasn't. I've fixed that and I'll be updating every so often. Yeah, it didn't really make sense that way.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, and I've already added another chapter.
Review By [
MistofRainbows] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stupid Magical Contract!" from
texaswookieReview:
Ok this is good really though you need to add another chapter you know one where Hermione is related to a scoob and has to explain why she has become betrothed and now has to become a big bad. Its just to great not to add in. Maybe the scoobies help her take over the wizarding world or something or at least a do and don't list.
Comments from author:
Whoops! That wasn't supposed to be marked "Complete" so I'll go in and fix that right now. Thanks for making note of that for me.
That's actually the chapter I just added.
Review By [
texaswookie] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stupid Magical Contract!" from
redjacobsonReview:
snicker! That's all, just *snicker* I would have rated it higher, but the chapter was too short
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Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll be adding more, but all the chapters will be slightly short.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [
redjacobson] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stupid Magical Contract!" from
CrazyDanReview:
Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [
CrazyDan] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
