Great start! I agree with the above(below?) reviews. This story totally demands a follow-up sequel, it would be such a waste if there isn't any... Xander fan here so it would be so cool to have more SG-1 and Scoobies interaction, especially Xander and Jack :)
Review By [Silvergem] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Brilliant! MORE!!! I could visualise everything happening, and the characterisation was perfect. Poor befuddled Jack... Please, please, please say there's going to be a sequel, because this so desperately needs it - and so do we, your readers!
Review By [ianquest] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh, please follow up! There are a few other Scooby/SG1-in-Vegas stories and none of them ever seemed to complete the follow up. What were the Scoobies celebrating? I'd love to see General Hammond during that debrief (SG1 is the only team he has to debrief from their Vacations; and isn't it skirting those regulations for them to be going on vacation together all the time?). Maybe Major Davis gets to be the one smirking over having something weird and shocking for them for a change.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
GOOD STORY! I am a Xander fan and the ladies are great. They work together well and the banter is spot on. The story flows smoothly and the characters are well depicted.
Good job emw.
Review By [winddancer] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Very nice- needs a sequel, though. One would think the SGC would have a few things that would 'wow' the slayers... imagine transporting them up to the Prometheus & meeting Thor etc...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Please tell me that this was either the first chapter of a longer story or the first story in a series, because this was great fun! And if it isn't, I very much enjoyed it as is. Thanks for sharing!
{snicker} Sequel. Sequel. Please. This was wonderful, and I can't wait to find out what could happen in the future of this 'verse. Well done. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Not Rated
The End? Whatta ya mean - The End? Want more please!
Characters' voices were spot on - loved it! One of those stories where I'll beat myself up trying to remember which season's dvd it's on before remembering it's fanfic...
More soon please!
jen
Review By [ferball] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]