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Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 5" from Harry
Review:
Gibbs, you were right about the core of the IWC being a elite ops group. But, once Xander gets the OK to tell you, your mind is going to be BLOWN!
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 4" from Harry
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Telling this tale, and getting the support from Gibbs is something that we would never have seen from Tony Harris. And while Xander might have gotten a head slap, it was not the usual one that Gibbs team would get. And it shows that Gibbs understood what Xander did. This man is TRULY worthy of being Xander's father!
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 3" from Harry
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Well, it looks like the IWC has earned a reputation that makes a LOT of organizations want to keep their mouths shut. Witchywoman? Sounds like Willow to me. And I would LOVE to see Ducky and Giles, along with Xander and Gibbs, getting together for drinks and a discussion of old times.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from Harry
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Well, Xander and Gibbs seem to be getting along pretty well. Gibbs still has questions he needs to ask, but its going to take time to get those answers.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Its going to be interesting to see how the one eyed Carpenter meshes with Gibbs. The mutual love of woodwork will help, but there is going to be a lot of questions asked on both sides that will need answers.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 20" from loretta
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this was a good story
Review By [loretta] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 20" from Dragonelf
Review:
You did a good job with this story and I am looking forward to read the sequels.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of King Friedrich Orange Cake::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it enough to give me some cake for it :) Once I finish with my current story I will probably be coming back to this. I try to stick with one at a time.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from SpacedCadet
Review:
"You didn't leave her at the alter did you?"

That should be "altar".
Comments from author:
Thank you very much
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 20" from twlight
Review:
wonderful. I am looking forward to the sequels seeing how the relationships develop should be rather interesting.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do plan on sequels in the future just not sure when :) but after the current story I am working on.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Downery
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Don't have an e-mail i can reply to but yea.. a little after i sent the last message i found out TTH advanced search is glitched. I click the minus on the 'slash' part so i just skipped the disclaimers but it seems when i enter a story read it and click the back button on my browser it resets the 'slash' part of the search to default and when i clicked to check out the next pages of the search it didn't block your story.

I was wondering why the advanced search didn't block your story and found that little glitch. At first i thought it was because you didn't label your story properly but it was TTH's fault. When i redid the advanced search and didn't enter a story and just clicked to the page your story was on it wasn't there. When i enter a fanfic and back out of it and then click to next pages on the search your story is there.

Sorry for blaming you when it was the site messing up.
Comments from author:
I do have it fixed now so people can email me, hopefully. I do appreciate the apology. I do try to label my stories inappropriately, both by rating and by the content. I also do put up warnings at the top of the first chapter that is separate so that people can see what all is contained so that they won't be blindsided. I admit I did not put who he was paired with originally with this story because when I was first writing it I wasn't sure who I was going to pair him with. I just knew it was going to be male.

I was irritated last night do to the fact you blamed me for having no warnings what so ever and you gave my story a rating of 1 because of it when in fact there was a warning present. You skipped over it and that has nothing to do with the search. I agree that the search should not have presented it to you, however you are at fault for not seeing the the slash notice at the top of chapter 1 and then reading to chapter 4. I was curious so I went and looked at other reviews you have posted. You seem to enjoy posting negative comments in reviews; some of which were extremely rude and nasty. No, your post to me was not that way thank goodness. Judging by what you have written in your other reviews I would hazard a guess that you are homophobic and a misogynist. You also have some other major issues judging from some of the comments you made about Angel that they never even alluded to in the show and had no bearing to the stories you were reviewing. It became very obvious after reading your "reviews" you could not have enjoyed any story on this site since you couldn't have enjoyed the show or it's characters.

I do thank you for the apology for blaming me for the search aspect messing up and showing you the story. I do agree you should not have to read a type of story you do not want to be exposed to. It's why I make sure such warnings and labels are in place. Hopefully since you now know about the glitch you will make sure to check for any warnings that authors do put in place.
Review By [Downery] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 4" from Downery
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Slash warning next time please. I don't care what anyone enjoys in the bedroom as long it doesn't involve kids (one reason i'm not an Angel fan even if i did enjoy the show) or rape but that doesn't mean i enjoy reading about it in any way shape or form.
Comments from author:
Right on first page I do have it posted that it is a slash story. I also have it listed under slash (that's why there is the two male symbol beside the story). I make sure to have it listed that way to try and avoid notices such as this. It would help however if people bothered to read such warnings before bothering to read the story.
Review By [Downery] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 20" from DeaconKrow
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So I just found this story and you have a lot of talent. I have to admit, I only got a few chapters in before I was turned off by the Xander Spike shippyness going on. Not really into slash, especially Xander slash, but there have been a few good stories I read with slash Xander with guys from other series that I thought were believe-able, but for the most part I just don't think it fits with the character. I'll be looking through your other stories tho as your writing holds a lot of promise IMHO.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for that. I'm flattered that you think I have a lot of talent. I do admit many of my stories are slash. Not all of them are but most of them are. My current one has a lot of slash in it along with some hetero. I do try to label them up front to being such so people do have warnings about it. One of the reasons I do see Xander in a m/m situation is Josh Weldon originally planned to make him gay instead of Willow so I see those tendencies especially during the senior year season before they decided to switch.

Thank you again for your humble opinion because I am very honored by it.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 20" from falsegod
Review:
awesome story not enough alone time for zander and spike but great
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I hope to eventually add more to this story making it a series and have more with alone time with Xander and Spike. Right now though I'm working on another story and I'm not the type to work on more than one at a time.
Review By [falsegod] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 20" from Netchka
Review:
Wonderfull story. I can't wait for sequels to come. Make sure you get lots of Gibbs and Faith, Giles and Abby action. I think it will be fun to read. Hope to read more soon. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do plan on several sequels for this once I finish with the Harry Potter story I'm working on now. I'm one of these people that can only do one story at a time I'm afraid. That being said though I do plan to come back to this one :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 20" from Muffie
Review:
I've enjoyed reading your story. I like the relationships you've developed for the Buffy characters eespecially. Thanks for a good read.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Once I get my current story bunny out of my head I do plan to make it into a series but it won't be for a bit.
Review By [Muffie] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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