Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Family Secrets

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful, I love that Tony and Ziva did such a wonderful job in getting Xander to go with them. I love Xander's reaction to the letter from his mom, I do have to wonder how he will react when/if he finds out that she wrote this ten years ago, that might get him a bit more upset. I love how both Gibbs and Xander notice how the other react/hold themselves. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. I think they are both going to have some rough patches with things but eventually it will work out. I will hopefully have the next chapter tomorrow. I'm starting to work on it tonight but it's getting late where I'm at so more then likely work it tomorrow.
Review By [twlight] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from kayron
Review:
I like the getting to know you part. They both ask good questions. But I think that Xander is right about Gibbs not being ready to have all of the answers yet. Gibbs is really observant. He noticed Xander's military bearing, and his situational awareness. Xander may look like a slacker, but being SunnyDale raised/honed, he knows how to be alert. Since Gibbs is military, he is probably going to notice a lot of mannerisms like that, and they will raise more questions. Having the two of them get to know each other should be pretty interesting.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked that part. I think giving all the info on the weird aspect of his life should take a while. Not something you just dive into unless you have no choice but you are right Gibbs will notice things. He's also like a terrier with a bone, he's not going to let go of something just because he's told to.
Review By [kayron] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from TwistingXan
Review:
great chapter.. love the pacing and characterizations.. loved the back and forth questioning and the mental chatter from each of them.. can't wait for more .. thanks for the quick update..
Comments from author:
You're very welcome. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I know myself I hate waiting for updates so I try not to take too long between them. My other two stories I didn't post until I was complete but this time I decided not to wait.
Review By [TwistingXan] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from Waverly
Review:
Awesome so far, can't wait to see where this goes! Are the Scoobies or Fang Gang gonna show up any time soon?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it so far. I hope you continue to do so. Some of the others will show up. Not sure who all yet but I know Willow for sure. The rest I'm still debating on.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, I'm enjoying the characterization here. I hope you have a few chapters ready to go. Looking forward to what happens next. And yes, the writing on the wall is that Spike and Xander are a couple. Not the most plausible pair, but I've read such things before.
Comments from author:
This one I'm writing as I go but I should have the next one up tomorrow though. Actually I hadn't decided on who Xander is going to be paired up with yet but it will be someone male. I have a few ideas but have to see where the story is going. I wanted to leave things open and either way Spike is complicated to explain.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from Lotusja
Review:
While Xander is not my favorite "buffy" character. I love how you did him justice. Great story. Cannot wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Makes me wonder who is your favorite character? Who knows they might show up in the story. I haven't set anything in stone yet.
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Meet him at the airport or invite him to come back is not the same as "pick him up." Let's see what kind of mood Xander is in.
Comments from author:
True it's not but Gibbs is used to saying Pick him up and not invite him back nicely. Since they didn't have a warrant or any information they would more then lightly ask nicely and go from there. Hope that makes sense.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Secrets Part 2" from Genuka
Review:
Amazing beginning. I can't wait for the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wayfinder
Review:
Good start. The characterization so far is nicely true to character, always a pleasant surprise. I look forward to seeing where you go with the plot. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I agree getting their "voices" down can be difficult. Hopefully I continue to stay true to the characters.
Review By [Wayfinder] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from marianbri
Review:
Great start. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I hope you enjoy the rest
Review By [marianbri] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
I love this story so far, I have to wonder if Xander is going to react to being picked up by the NCIS like a kidnapping and get really mad and be difficult. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm working on the next chapter right now so I'll hopefully have something tonight or tomorrow.
Review By [twlight] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
Gibbs REALLY needs to work on his people skills. That is not the best way to start a relationship. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Yeah his skills are lacking but he has a good heart. I think that will win out in time.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Ohhh THAT will be an interesting meeting.
I hope nobody gets killed in the airport.
Comments from author:
Well Xander can be nice and patient. He'll probably wait and then raise holy hell ;) Still working on the next chapter.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
You can't arrest without cause or a warrant. Gibbs just put his team in danger of being sued/fired/imprisoned. Law enforcement agents are trained to ignore illegal orders, but being Gibbs' team, who knows? Though this would not be a good way to meet your son. For all Gibbs knows, Xander could be on his way to a very important meeting that he will make him late for. Personally I think Gibbs should have just met him at the airport, given him a brief description of what happened (possibly a copy of the letter) and then left the rest up to him. I have to imagine that Xander will be pissed about being dragged away for no reason, father or no father. After all, now it looks like he gave up one drunken (possibly) abusive father for one that abuses from behind a badge. I can't wait for the confrontation.
I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Well he didn't say arrest he just said pick him up, there is a difference. It's going to be interesting when they meet that's for sure. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. I'm working on the next chapter right now.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
Review:
Hehe, I have a feeling Xander isn't going to be too happy about being picked up by NCIS agents. This is going to be awesome. Fun concept, I've never seen a fic with Gibbs as Xander's father, well done.
Please update again soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I haven't either to be honest but in many ways they are a like. Perhaps not in looks but in attitude, mess with me or mine and you will get hurt type attitude. I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully I'll have it tonight or tomorrow.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
start back Page: 21 of 22 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking