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Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from banditdoz
Review:
Loving the character development more please :D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, good chapter with a nice informative bit at the end. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from DragonBard
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Well, it's possible Willow could resurrect Sirius.

Of course, she'd only do it if he's not in Heaven, but she can at least check if the location of his soul.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will It Be Faith or Fear" from (Current Donor)Starfox
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Oh, now I am wondering who is Regulus' son... Faith is getting a bigger Family than she ever expected.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from MistofRainbows
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I was enjoying the story until you killed Sirius. Enough had changed that he shouldn't have gone off like that without getting backup. The fact that Lucius died means that you have no excuse. You're butchering shit for your sick amusement. I can't see them actually arresting Narcissa... because honestly she wasn't exactly breaking the law... and at her social status with the money she had... Lucius would have heard about it and things wouldn't have happened... Basically it seems like you're trying to have things both ways... plus Andromeda wouldn't have taken Draco. Plus the Black house was nothing truly special... Dumbledore wouldn't need it... the crap for the necklace Regulus stole... it wouldn't have needed to be changed... (he should have visited the hiding place...) he would have just had to survive. Willow could reach into the veil and pull Sirius out... It's an interesting concept but it doesn't really work all that well... Faith being older doesn't fit with Sirius going to prison... not finding out he has a child... it's all sorts of screwed.

As for good points, It's interesting to see Faith with some interesting wizard powers...

Which brings me back to another bad point... Kreature trying to get Faith's father killed... there is no reason he would have done that... Sirius might not have actually told him to get out... if he was busy dealing with Faith... Anyways good luck on the story...
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from Dmitri
Review:
This is a very interesting story. Please continue.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from SamDragon
Review:
Excellent story.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Sheep" from MistofRainbows
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Nymphandora ... It's Nymphadora....... not the damn n... please fix it... it hurts to read it that way.
Comments from author:
Sorry. Thought I caught all of them. Hard to tell when I'm uploading the chapters from my phone and that pesky spellcheck doesn't include the HP lexicon.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from JJDudeman
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Dang, but that last line was beautiful.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from piecesofyourheart
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Amazing you know that? Because of this fic, Andy is easily become my favorite HP character after Luna. Love it!
Review By [piecesofyourheart] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from deathgeonous
Review:
A very interesting and quite the good fic. Thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from (Current Donor)Starfox
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Great story, picking up plot, so to speak, and depth, with Andromeda taking in Harry and Draco in addition to faith. I hope Xander and Willow will play a major role too.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate has Led You Through It" from Ember
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I like how much you have Andromeda and her husband in this story. I wonder how powerful Faith is going to be and what they boys are going to think about her, I don't see her taking Draco's attitude very well, also props for not Kreacher bashing.
Review By [Ember] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All the Fears and Faults You Left Behind" from MayhemPrincess
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Well, I already reviewed at ff. net but what the hell? I'm going to start reading from the beginning again to remember what's happened so far, so why not? This story is so good it certainly deserves more reviews :) Update soon! I'll give you a cookie....or maybe just 10 gold stars since the cookie would not survive the trip ;)
Review By [MayhemPrincess] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All the Fears and Faults You Left Behind" from eriktheviking
Review:
A cracking good story, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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