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Review of chapter "Knock You Down" from LeaFairy
Review:
Amazing. This chapter was simply amazing! The background story of what Regulus did and had Talia do to insure Faith's safety was freaking... Wow! How horrible for Talia and her baby, but good for Faith-- she wouldn't have survived all the crap she went through if not. *sighs* Something more for Faith to feel guilty for though...

Good news about Regulus being alive! *squeals* I wonder what shape he's in from suffering some of Faith's injuries over the years? Hopefully he'll be okay!

I also loved the surprise twist of where Faith's five by five came from. Awesome idea! I love that she somehow remembered that part of her past, even with her memories all messed with.

Anyways, I very much loved this chapter and I definitely can't wait to read more as well! Thanks so much for the update!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coven Inquiry" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying your dramatic narrative which is very vivid in its sense of being "real".
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Knock You Down" from Cmiller
Review:
I liked that. And that was an interesting take on how Faith came up with the 5 by 5 thing. I mean in a book on Faith's back story it shows that her father was military and also in prison for killing a cop also don't know if said book is canon...but whatever your idea was great and I can't wait for more.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sweet Child O'Mine - Guns N Roses" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very real feeling.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Knock You Down" from AllenPitt
Review:
huh. And here I always figured that 5 by 5 thing meant she had a dad or uncle in the air force or army (it's a radio term meaning 'transmission is strong & clear', basically).... but this makes more sense I suppose.
All she needs now is to meet her nice Auntie Bella..... ok, maybe not just now. This "Coven" has a lot of work to do before the slayers/council is going to trust them much, for sure.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Over Yet" from Robby
Review:
Awesome chapter, looking forward to seeing what else changes!
Review By [Robby] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Over Yet" from yuiop
Review:
Great chapter
Review By [yuiop] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Over Yet" from borgrabbit
Review:
A WTF haiku:

The insane abound
Storming in their straight jackets
Urinating fears

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Great chapter! More‼
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Over Yet" from Currchan
Review:
Excellent story. Please write more.
Review By [Currchan] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Over Yet" from eclecticcollect
Review:
I'm really enjoying the way this is developing.
Review By [eclecticcollect] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Over Yet" from LeaFairy
Review:
Wickedly awesome chapter! So much happened in it too! Just wow!

I LOVE that Narcissa got thrown over and her horrible Coven disbanded. Yay, go Andromeda and Giles! And well Willow too. Andromeda totally is wonderful :)

I also loved the twist with Faith's ma being somewhat magical-- that she came from Squibs and that she knew all about magic, witches/wizards, house elves, etc... Really brilliant. Poor Faith must be horribly confused with all her 'new' memories though. Very cool that she's the rightful Black Heir. It's very much made of awesome! Bellatrix is going to be sooo pissed when/if she finds out. *grins*

Faith 'getting' Kreacher is just too funny... At least he actually likes her. LoL. And great twist with her ordering him to watch over Sirius and all, too bad it won't keep Sirius from getting killed though :(

The bit with Regulus was excellent as well! I am so happy that there's a chance he's still alive. Yay! I also love how much he adored Faith-- that he truly loved her and tried his best to keep her safe. *hugs*

Anyways, thanks So much for the update! I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait to read more!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Over Yet" from AllenPitt
Review:
Neat. So Narcissa gets arrested, then maybe Lucius if the whole fiasco at the Ministry (prophecies) happens as in canon? Gee, cousin Draco is in for a hard time of it. And Regulus might still be alive. Nice touch!
Hm. And, the Council is now a lot stronger than ever before. Instead of having one slayer in their charge they now have dozens of trained ones and a lot more being trained, probably hundreds. Makes the power balance quite a bit different than in the past.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Way" from LeaFairy
Review:
Well, the first 'real' meeting between Faith and Sirius could've gone worse :-) I love Andromeda though, she really is a blessing for Faith-- she seems to understand her better than anyone else, maybe even better than Faith herself. And I have a feeling that they're going to get along great, or at least pretty well.

I wonder what's happening with Regulus? Is he really alive? That would be so awesome if he was... especially for Faith. It would be good for her to have another family member, especially one who *was* there for her in the past.

Loved the foreshadowing with Narcissa. I hope she (and the Coven) gets her/their ass kicked by Giles. *grins*

Amazing chapter... I can't wait to read more! Thanks so much for the update!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Way" from Eureka
Review:
Very good, only one mistake that stuck out.
"The sense of uneasy grew heavy on her nape," it should be "The sense of unease grew heavy on her nape,"
So is N going to help or is Bel going to interfere?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Way" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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