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Interesting start, but you really need to get a beta reader. There are a lot of misspellings and general English errors.
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LeaFairy Review:
Cool ass beginning! I look forward to reading more!!
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LeaFairy ] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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Doodle Review:
Update quickly please. *infinite puppy dog eyes*
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Doodle ] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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This is a great start to the story. If the rest of it is as good as the beginning I will throughly enjoy this story. I look forward to the scoobies arriving in San Fran.
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mmooch Review:
Howling with laughter over Henry's response to everything; he should get along great with Oz - if he ever shows up in the story.
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mmooch ] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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