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Review of chapter "Conflict" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Hey, I like the idea of him being ticklish, so no worries. And can I just breathe a huge sigh of relief that Dawn's secret is coming out? Hopefully it will make Buffy and Clark spill too.
Comments from author:
I don't want to hand out spoilers, but revealing does occur from certain parties. Glad you enjoyed the ticklish idea. Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Turmoil" from johnsmith
Review:
The good old sex dream. Saying that it has been awhile for Clark since he got any. Since he was mortal. 2 years i think by this point.

Anyway love it how you keep having them just miss finding out the truth about each other.

Great update. Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Glad that you like what you've read so far. I'm trying to put the next update together, but it seems to be escaping me at the moment. Thanks for the review!
Review By [johnsmith] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Distraction" from Tanydwr
Review:
Nice start.

I'd love to see a reference or two to Lois. Even if it's not going Clois (my OTP), the friendship between Lois and Clark is great, and I can definitely see Clark commenting about Dawn's similarities to a certain army brat friend of his. Buffy's too, come to think. I can see Lois kicking arse and Dawn's 'I want to be her when I grow up...' Of course, we're probably not going to see her unless she decides to visit Sunnydale to wind Clark up, but a girl can dream.

Maybe I need a fic where Joyce's maiden name was Lane...
Comments from author:
I honestly don't see too much of Lois coming into play in this story as a character. You do bring up an interesting point how Clark could potentially compare some traits of the sisters to Lois. I'll keep it in mind.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Distraction" from kellyinb
Review:
Loving the story still. Like the take that Buffy is more used to the "Average" monsters and Clark the more powerful. And love the interplay between them, writing good dialog is a wonderful skill and makes the story more real to me. Again, loving the main characters and hoping that both Martha and Clark stay around for a while. For some reason I'm kinda hoping for a bit of a drawn out introduction of Clark and then Martha (or the other way which could be interesting) to the supernatural. Please keep up the good work...

PS... Chuckled out loud with the "Look it's a distraction" line.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoy the story so far and the small bits of humour I try to include. The introduction to the supernatural will probably be drawn out for Clark. I've actually written out Martha; you'll see in the next chapter a small time lapse. After reading your review though, I'm considering writing some small pieces to accompany this story to fill in the small time jump.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [kellyinb] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Distraction" from nowhereman
Review:
I think "Look! Air!" would've been the better, but it was funny anyway.

So far so good.

I think you did a good job with displaying Dawn's attraction to Clark. He's got this whole "Knight in Shining Armor" feel to him (emotionally speaking, thogh he saves ppl in the literal sense too XD) and also him being an older guy, which I've observed many younger women go for.

I'm partial to Dawn/Clark pairings myself, and if you've ever read my stories you'd see that, but since Clark is much older then Dawn in this one I totally agree with how you've handled it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the story so far. Dawn/Clark relationship in this story isn't going to be a romantic one, but it will be a major player in the story outline I have planned.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [nowhereman] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Support" from kellyinb
Review:
Love the story concept and looking forward to where it goes from here. Like the way you have avoided some of the "normal" weaknesses of the characters (kryptonite etc.) and focused on their emotions and actions. I'm looking forward to seeing how the more experienced hero (Buffy) deals with the almost newbie (year or 2 under he belt as more than fortuitous accidents that happen around him) and the contrast of experience vs. power levels etc. Please keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
The way I see it (based on when I chose to intersect the two verses), is that Buffy has far more experience with baddies and saving the world, but Clark has more experience with the super big bads. Glory would represent the 3rd super powerful superpowered big bad that Clark has had to face. A main part of the story for me is how Clark and Buffy learn from each other's experiences and draw from there. Of course there's the obvious problem of secret keeping getting in the way.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [kellyinb] • Date [3 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Support" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Oh, poor Clark. I wouldn't wish walking in on the Buffybot and Spike on my worst enemy (fictionally speaking). It was disturbing enough to have Xander and Anya catch them in the graveyard. Ugh! Now I need some mental bleach. ...Hmm, the real Buffy smooching with Clark...yeah, much better! Can you help out with making that a reality in this story?
Comments from author:
Buffybot and Spike was both disgusting yet simultaneously hilarious in my mind. As for the real Buffy and Clark... we'll see. I have a general plot outline for this story and we'll see where it takes me/how it changes. Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grief" from aveave
Review:
Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm hoping to get several chapters out before school starts/picks up. Thanks for the review.
Review By [aveave] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Grief" from johnsmith
Review:
Interesting start. So Clark's alien mind can pick through the false memories huh? This ought to be good. Hope you continue this soon.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Clark's always been a little special. I'll be updating this soon/regularly before schools starts. Thanks for the review!
Review By [johnsmith] • Date [31 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grief" from nowhereman
Review:
Alright, so far so good. It has potential
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment. I appreciate the review!
Review By [nowhereman] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grief" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Definitely exciting beginning here! Can't wait to see what you got planned next.
Comments from author:
You'll find out soon. Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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