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Review of chapter "XIV" from DianeCastle
Review:
This is really nicely done, with some great little touches like Ziva's issues with American idioms. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks - I'm trying to get it finished, but it has a mind of its own and insists on me adding little twiddly bits like the meeting with Kort and its aftermath. But we'll get there fairly soon, I think.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from Greywizard
Review:
I just have to tell you, once again, how much I'm loving this story, and this chapter simply makes me love it even more.

The idea that Dexter is going to at least try to frame the CIA for framing him is simply too good an idea to let go, and I am simply delighted by yet another piece of brilliance you're giving us. ;-)

Thanks for sharing this with us. ;-)
Comments from author:
He's flailing around for anything that'll help to muddy the waters, and Kort just gave him some near-perfect ammo for that.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from jakedaman
Review:
Wow. Didn't think I would like this. Bot you've drawn me in. Can't wait to see where you are going with this.
Comments from author:
Working on the next part now.
Review By [jakedaman] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
that was a wonderful surprise. well done. very well told tale, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks - gradually getting to the end, I hope I won't let you down.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [23 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII" from slmncpm
Review:
ryn: sorry for the brevity, storms here make for short notes when the electric start to flicker. the OMG was because you updated and i loved where this is headed, now what?
Comments from author:
I try and write my way to the end of the story, what else?
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from slmncpm
Review:
omg!!
Comments from author:
Never quite sure what to make of a review like this. Was that "omg!! that's a surprise!" or "omg!! that sucks!"

Hope the former rather than the latter.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from Elleria
Review:
So happy to see an update. Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks - really hoping the next part will finish things, but finishing this one is trickier than I'd anticipated.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII" from RevDorothyL
Review:
CIA recruitment! THAT I certainly didn't see coming! :)
Comments from author:
Neither did Dexter.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from lunalurker
Review:
Oh wow, didn't see that one coming. Full of twists, this is!
Comments from author:
Trent Kort is as twisty as a very twisty thing; beyond that I can't say much.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from Oxnate
Review:
ARRRGH! Do you know how many reviews for the last chapter said 'One more chapter'? I was so hopeful that this would wrap everything up. Still the twist was nice in that there seems to be a glimmer of hope for Dexter to do something other than call Deb to bring him in.
Comments from author:
Apologies - the bridge from where chapter 12 ends to where the story ends is proving to be a lot more complicated than I thought; this chapter handled a few of the problems, the next will hopefully fix the rest.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from Greywizard
Review:
“Career change, mister…?”

“Kort; Trent Kort. I work for the CIA.”

Okay, that came completely out of left field, but it's definitely a major game changer. ;-)

I love this story, and will almost be sorry to see it end. ;-)
Comments from author:
Kort is being his usual devious self - won't say more than that for now.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XII" from Oxnate
Review:
Man, I love Dexter. Glad I found this. Looking forward to the wrap up.
Comments from author:
Thanks - hopefully just one part to go.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XII" from Elleria
Review:
Love this, looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Probably one chapter to go if I can tie off all the loose ends.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XII" from Maeven
Review:
Oh no! About the only way I see Dexter getting out of this is if he can fake his own death and get the heck outta there. Fantastic story, hope the next chappie will be soon, you have us all on the edge of our seats, waiting for the big finale!
Comments from author:
I hope the next chapter will finish the story, if I can get everything to come together.
Review By [Maeven] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XII" from deusexsububi
Review:
It takes a black belt word smith to jive together this many characters coherently but with major economy of words, and have it be good. My hat is off to you, sir. Great job.

Let's just see what Dex does.
Comments from author:
Should be drawing to a close in the next installment.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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