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Review of chapter "XV" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Oh, Gibbs, you sneaky devil! After all these years, you can still surprise me with the lengths you'll go to and the people you'll work with in order to 'get your man'.
Comments from author:
Yup. He isn't done yet!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from Bushranger
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I guess you could say that was a nice burn laid on Kort. ;)
Comments from author:
Kort definitely underestimated him - we'll find out how badly in the next chapter.
Review By [Bushranger] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIV" from slmncpm
Review:
heh. love it!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from Doraemax
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Now this...i did not see coming....hahaha

nicely played...a twist worthy of Dexter.
You know...reading this have give me reason to watch season 6 of Dexter. I know its awesome...but the idea of Dexter being outed doesn't sit well with me...since i really couldn't see him continue living when all that he is is known to all. our current society is not that flexible.


Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I've enjoyed all of the seasons, but Dexter is gradually losing room to manoeuvre - they've said the current series will be the last, it'll be interesting to see how it ends.
Review By [Doraemax] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIV" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love seeing Dexter all but accusing Kort and the CIA of doing to HIM exactly what had been done by the people who'd had Michael Westen burned. A very credible alternative narrative, and one that both NCIS and the FBI might be willing to believe, given enough supporting evidence and their own bad past experiences with Kort. :)
Comments from author:
Not so much believe it, more realise that it muddies the water enough that it will be VERY difficult to prosecute Dexter.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from Mcspender
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Now that's how you lay a nice trap, ooh yeah.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Dexter is pretty intelligent and desperate for a way to get out of trouble. Antagonising Kort may not be the best way to do it.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIV" from deusexsububi
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The only reason why I'm not annoyed that you write the first line of every Michael Weston scene with "when you're a spy..." is because the series is so Damn guilty of it too. =)

Amazing story. Just when you think Dexter is out for the count he turns the tables somehow. But is it enough? More soon please!
Comments from author:
The trouble with Westen and Dexter is that they both have internal monologues, starting out with "When you're a spy" makes it clear that it's Michael's monologue. I'll try to vary it a little next time.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIV" from SnowyMountain
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Son of a bitch! I have to admit that I was expecting the recruitment angle and all, but the twist you threw in with Dexter accusing the CIA to 'frame' him? Oh, that was awesome. Nice, very nice. Eagerly awaiting the conclusion to this story. It's wrapping up very nicely I think.
Comments from author:
He REALLY doesn't want to work anywhere near Gibbs (and even more Abby!), so he might as well take advantage some other way. But he may have just made a powerful enemy.
Review By [SnowyMountain] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIV" from Oxnate
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Muddy the waters, indeed. Or perhaps 'bloody the waters' would be the more apt term here. Seeing as he just threw a wounded CIA operative to the sharks.
Comments from author:
Kort deserves it. Kort ALWAYS deserves it!
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from DianeCastle
Review:
This is really nicely done, with some great little touches like Ziva's issues with American idioms. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks - I'm trying to get it finished, but it has a mind of its own and insists on me adding little twiddly bits like the meeting with Kort and its aftermath. But we'll get there fairly soon, I think.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from Greywizard
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I just have to tell you, once again, how much I'm loving this story, and this chapter simply makes me love it even more.

The idea that Dexter is going to at least try to frame the CIA for framing him is simply too good an idea to let go, and I am simply delighted by yet another piece of brilliance you're giving us. ;-)

Thanks for sharing this with us. ;-)
Comments from author:
He's flailing around for anything that'll help to muddy the waters, and Kort just gave him some near-perfect ammo for that.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from jakedaman
Review:
Wow. Didn't think I would like this. Bot you've drawn me in. Can't wait to see where you are going with this.
Comments from author:
Working on the next part now.
Review By [jakedaman] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
that was a wonderful surprise. well done. very well told tale, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks - gradually getting to the end, I hope I won't let you down.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [23 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII" from slmncpm
Review:
ryn: sorry for the brevity, storms here make for short notes when the electric start to flicker. the OMG was because you updated and i loved where this is headed, now what?
Comments from author:
I try and write my way to the end of the story, what else?
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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