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Review of chapter "XIII" from slmncpm
Review:
omg!!
Comments from author:
Never quite sure what to make of a review like this. Was that "omg!! that's a surprise!" or "omg!! that sucks!"

Hope the former rather than the latter.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from Elleria
Review:
So happy to see an update. Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks - really hoping the next part will finish things, but finishing this one is trickier than I'd anticipated.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII" from RevDorothyL
Review:
CIA recruitment! THAT I certainly didn't see coming! :)
Comments from author:
Neither did Dexter.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from lunalurker
Review:
Oh wow, didn't see that one coming. Full of twists, this is!
Comments from author:
Trent Kort is as twisty as a very twisty thing; beyond that I can't say much.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from Oxnate
Review:
ARRRGH! Do you know how many reviews for the last chapter said 'One more chapter'? I was so hopeful that this would wrap everything up. Still the twist was nice in that there seems to be a glimmer of hope for Dexter to do something other than call Deb to bring him in.
Comments from author:
Apologies - the bridge from where chapter 12 ends to where the story ends is proving to be a lot more complicated than I thought; this chapter handled a few of the problems, the next will hopefully fix the rest.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII" from Greywizard
Review:
“Career change, mister…?”

“Kort; Trent Kort. I work for the CIA.”

Okay, that came completely out of left field, but it's definitely a major game changer. ;-)

I love this story, and will almost be sorry to see it end. ;-)
Comments from author:
Kort is being his usual devious self - won't say more than that for now.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XII" from Oxnate
Review:
Man, I love Dexter. Glad I found this. Looking forward to the wrap up.
Comments from author:
Thanks - hopefully just one part to go.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XII" from Elleria
Review:
Love this, looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Probably one chapter to go if I can tie off all the loose ends.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XII" from Maeven
Review:
Oh no! About the only way I see Dexter getting out of this is if he can fake his own death and get the heck outta there. Fantastic story, hope the next chappie will be soon, you have us all on the edge of our seats, waiting for the big finale!
Comments from author:
I hope the next chapter will finish the story, if I can get everything to come together.
Review By [Maeven] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XII" from deusexsububi
Review:
It takes a black belt word smith to jive together this many characters coherently but with major economy of words, and have it be good. My hat is off to you, sir. Great job.

Let's just see what Dex does.
Comments from author:
Should be drawing to a close in the next installment.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XII" from SnowyMountain
Review:
Glad to see you're continuing this series. This is one of the best multi-crossovers that I've read with NCIS, Burn Notice, Dexter, with hints of other series as well.

The anticipation is growing as Dexter's world seems to be on the verge of crashing down on him. Will Dexter be able to escape NCIS, the FBI, and everybody else? Part of me wants to see him brought to justice while part of me wants to see him escape getting arrested. Looking forward to the conclusion.
Comments from author:
The next part will be the last, if I can wrestle it to completion.
Review By [SnowyMountain] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XII" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Oh, NO! It looks like things are really falling apart for Dexter, and much as I normally enjoy rooting for Gibbs and Michael and their respective teams, I really HATE to see Dexter lose it all. And poor Deb! If only for her sake, Dexter really needs to be cleared of this suspicion somehow.
Comments from author:
No comment, except that the next part will probably be the last if I can wrestle the story to a close.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XI" from Poppa
Review:
I'm enjoying this story a great deal! Excellent work :)
I look forward to its thrilling conclusion.
Comments from author:
Thanks - hopefully I'll get the next chapter up in the next couple of weeks.
Review By [Poppa] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XI" from Elleria
Review:
Very muchly looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Hope to get it done in the next couple of weeks.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XI" from leelaa
Review:
Great to see another chapter. :) Found it damn annoying - though understandable - that Dex's colleagues were more concerned about having worked with him and not known he was killing bad guys than the discovery that the dead cop murdered her own child. Waiting for the next chapter, and in no hurry to see this story wrap up. Thanks for a great read. :)
Comments from author:
I think it's mostly that they think they should have been able to sense something off about Dexter and didn't; in the other case, it isn't anyone they know and there's nothing that they can do about it, so it's just not so immediate.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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