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Review of chapter "XII" from SnowyMountain
Review:
Glad to see you're continuing this series. This is one of the best multi-crossovers that I've read with NCIS, Burn Notice, Dexter, with hints of other series as well.

The anticipation is growing as Dexter's world seems to be on the verge of crashing down on him. Will Dexter be able to escape NCIS, the FBI, and everybody else? Part of me wants to see him brought to justice while part of me wants to see him escape getting arrested. Looking forward to the conclusion.
Comments from author:
The next part will be the last, if I can wrestle it to completion.
Review By [SnowyMountain] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XII" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Oh, NO! It looks like things are really falling apart for Dexter, and much as I normally enjoy rooting for Gibbs and Michael and their respective teams, I really HATE to see Dexter lose it all. And poor Deb! If only for her sake, Dexter really needs to be cleared of this suspicion somehow.
Comments from author:
No comment, except that the next part will probably be the last if I can wrestle the story to a close.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XI" from Poppa
Review:
I'm enjoying this story a great deal! Excellent work :)
I look forward to its thrilling conclusion.
Comments from author:
Thanks - hopefully I'll get the next chapter up in the next couple of weeks.
Review By [Poppa] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XI" from Elleria
Review:
Very muchly looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Hope to get it done in the next couple of weeks.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XI" from leelaa
Review:
Great to see another chapter. :) Found it damn annoying - though understandable - that Dex's colleagues were more concerned about having worked with him and not known he was killing bad guys than the discovery that the dead cop murdered her own child. Waiting for the next chapter, and in no hurry to see this story wrap up. Thanks for a great read. :)
Comments from author:
I think it's mostly that they think they should have been able to sense something off about Dexter and didn't; in the other case, it isn't anyone they know and there's nothing that they can do about it, so it's just not so immediate.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XI" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Glad to see Dexter hasn't run out of ideas or options, yet, even though some folks seem to be closing in on him!
Comments from author:
He's got plenty of ideas - maybe too many for his own good, we'll have to see.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XI" from orangemike
Review:
You can imagine how this president of an AFSCME local felt when Dexter thought about bringing in his union rep. (By the way, a member [or enemy] of the union is gonna call it "AFSCME", not "the AFSCME": most folks forget exactly what all those letters stand for.)
-- Michael J. Lowrey, President, AFSCME Local 91, Wisconsin State Employees Union (where AFSCME was born)
Comments from author:
OK, thanks, I'll fix it. Hope you liked the idea!
-- Marcus L. Rowland, member of the General Municipal and Boilermaker's Union (and no, I have never made a boiler in my life...)
Review By [orangemike] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XI" from deusexsububi
Review:
To be perfectly frank you're doing these characters more justice than their present producers. Except for maybe burn notice. That's essentially okay.

Keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thanks - Burn Notice will be in the next (and I hope final) chapter a little more prominently.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Hope you'll love how it ends.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X" from RevDorothyL
Review:
No complaints from me about another chapter to go! The more, the better. :)
Comments from author:
The next one probably will be the last, but it will be a longish chapter.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X" from deusexsububi
Review:
Yeah, don't worry about concluding this anytime soon. The more the merrier. Keep it up.
Comments from author:
The next part will probably finish the story, but it will be a long chapter.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X" from leelaa
Review:
Loved the chapter. Not really for loose ends being tied up in the usual sense because I want Dexter still around doing what he does. lol.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for writing this one. :)
Comments from author:
I hope you'll like the way I resolve things.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "IX" from justapiranha
Review:
Just found it. Love it looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm just writing the final scene - then I need to write the rest of the final chapter, of course, but hopefully that won't take too long. With luck it'll be done within a week or two.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "IX" from leelaa
Review:
Great to see the update. Loved the chapter, and the way the story is progressing with the many crossover characters. Thanks for a great read. :)
Comments from author:
Hopefully I'll bring it to a satisfactory end in the next instalment.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "IX" from Elleria
Review:
Gah! Update soon please!!!
Comments from author:
I'll try.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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