Hmm..... Interesting. I've never watched Dexter, and only catch the occasional ep. of Burn Notice and CSI Miami, but this is interesting and easy to follow. I can't wait to see more.
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May be a while, I'm trying to finish a games project and that is taking most of my writing time.
Nice inter-weaving of the various series' characters and plotlines.
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Thanks - this chapter was a lot shorter than I originally planned, it's likely that I won't be able to do much work on the story for the next couple of weeks so I ended it at the best point with what I had.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
You'd think McGee would know about preview and testing versions . . .
Nice work. I recommend giving Caine a set of librarian cords.
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Re the software - for the purpose of this story the previews etc. would leave a slightly different creation record, and McGee is dumbing it down for the technical illiterate.
Hey, it worked on Caine...
Re Caine's glasses, if they were on a cord someone would surely use it to strangle him.
Love the Sudoku-solving seer, but I can't wait for Sam Axe and Michael Weston (and, dare I hope, Fiona?) to get involved.
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It's an idea I developed for an RPG (which also had Sudoku as a martial art, with monks hopping around a dojo ruled off in squares shouting numbers with each blow), it was fairly well received.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
You have now brought in the folks from Burn Notice. My heart just leapt for joy. Well, Cane was a complete bust. Of course I imagine he will continue to try to find out what Jethro's people are doing, just in case there is glory to be won. Lol! I wonder if the NCIS team will eventually run into a couple of old retired undercover cops. Possibly one black and one white? Still driving classic hot cars? Just wondering. Lol!
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Probably not, I really don't remember much about them. Caine will be back later in the story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Lol! Love how the other cops think of Good Ol' Horatio. He is always a bit of an 'over-achiever' isn't he? You just keep mixing in more and more universe and mating them all seamlessly. Well done, as always.
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We may be coming up to the bit where a lot of people back away shaking their heads in disbelief, but we shall see.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
This is an interesting story and you are awesome. I squeed that you crossover NCIS with Dexter and CSI: Miami. Okey not so much CSI: Miami. Horatio Caine gives me the wiggies. I don't know if it is the glasses or the head tilt of doom. Can't the guy ever look at a person face straight up?
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He takes off his glasses more often than Clark Kent, but without the excuse of X-ray vision. I am not planning to be kind to him.
Review By [MollyAnnise] • Date [14 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Maybe I'm in the minority here but I like CSI: Miami, and Caine. But I also see it for what it is, the slicked-up hot girls and action, version of the franchise. I did like the reactions of the Dexter characters though, it was a little unexpected, and I don't agree with them but nowhere is it written that all fictional cops have to like each other. But I'm hoping it's just inter agency rivalry talking.
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A bit of both; Caine is a bit too judgemental to be a really good forensic scientist; he forms his opinions early and often seems to go looking for evidence to support them, rather than finding the facts first. Plus those sunglasses REALLY bug me.
Review By [JTM] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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