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Review of chapter "VI" from RevDorothyL
Review:
You've got the dialogue for the various characters down pat (including Debra Morgan's trademark profanity) -- nice work!
Comments from author:
Thanks - there probably isn't ENOUGH swearing but it'll do, I think
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VI" from leelaa
Review:
Great to see an update. Excellent chapter. Thank for writing it. :)
Looking forward to seeing what happens next in this story.
Comments from author:
Sooner or later Dex will probably kill someone ;-)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VI" from mendenbar
Review:
This is definitely complicated - however, it is also terribly addictive.
Comments from author:
Thanks - the thing about Dexter, which I think some stories miss, is that his life is insanely complicated - he's continually trying to juggle dozens of balls, and occasionally comes close to dropping them.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VI" from Greywizard
Review:
I'm always delighted to see another chapter of this story show up. ;-)

Going by the information the NCIS gang have available right now, the primary link between all of the cases they're checking out is Debra, and she appears to be more of an incidental victim than any sort of serial killer. And since she's currently in the hospital, recovering from a bullet wound, it doesn't look like they have to worry about her possibly running away from them f they need to talk to her again.

I'm enjoying this immensely.
Comments from author:
Hopefully the next chapter will be up a little faster - for various reasons I need to take the plot in a slightly different direction than originally planned, but I've laid most of the groundwork for that now.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from Christy
Review:
Still loving it so far....lemme guess- Ziva and Fi both got better acquainted with Michael around the same time? Still fun to think about tho :D
Comments from author:
Something like that - hopefully I will be continuing soon.
Review By [Christy] • Date [3 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from ladylark
Review:
I am enjoying this a lot. You've really got the tone of Burn Notice and NCIS and from what I have seen of Dexter you've nailed that as well. I look forward to seeing more.
Comments from author:
Hope to have more up soon.
Review By [ladylark] • Date [30 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from Elleria
Review:
Love this, looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Hopefully it will be reasonably soon.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grndragon
Review:
I have liked your story from the beginning, but thought you were going overboard on your characterization of Caine until last night's creepy ending. After watching the implication that Caine was about to beat the crap out of a possibly innocent if somewhat asshole-sh suspect based on the accusations of the actual killer, I think it wouldn't be too hard to believe that Caine might deserve Dexter's services or at least approve of them.
Comments from author:
There was an episode I saw a while ago which ended with Caine letting someone free, knowing that he planned to kill someone else, and doing nothing to stop it. Admittedly Gibbs has done much the same thing, hesitating to shoot a marine who eventually killed a mob boss, but Gibbs never claims to be an impartial seeker of truth. Caine does, loudly and often.
Review By [grndragon] • Date [18 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from Greywizard
Review:
I just re-read the entire story again, and have to compliment you on how seamlessly the crosses join together.

I loved seeing Sonny Crockett show up, and hope we see more of him in the future, as opposed to Caine, who has always impressed me more as a judgmental asshole (although I do commend him for his loyalty to his team).

I also liked Fornel's trying to point Gibbs and his team towards finding the actual killer of his friend while not actually saying anything that might come back to bite either of them at a later date was also fun to re-read. ;-)

And will we be seeing Fiona and Ziva in any sort of cat fight? (He said hopefully.) ;-)

Great work here. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comments from author:
I don't think that there will be a fight, but we may see a few bare claws and some hissing...
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Ziva has history with both Michael AND Fiona? I know I should've been expecting something like that, but you managed to surprise me again.
Comments from author:
People like Michael, Ziva and Fi tend to move in similar circles. It shouldn't be altogether surprising if they've had a previous encounter.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from Mcspender
Review:
Fiona got up from the table where she'd been watching us, and came over to us. "Ziva," I said, "This is Fiona Glenanne. Fi, Ziva David."

"We've met," they said together. Neither of them sounded happy about it.
...Threesome for the win??? ; ).

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
Is there going to be a cat fight between Ziva and Fi? Will Tony bring popcorn?
Comments from author:
Well, they have a lot in common. They may end up ganging up on Michael. Or Tony, of course.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from leelaa
Review:
Great to see an update to this fic after quite a while. Damn good chapter. Will Fiona and Ziva turn out to be slayers?
Comments from author:
No to either of them as slayers, though there will be more Buffyverse in the mix.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "IV" from yuiop
Review:
I am liking the story so far :D
Comments from author:
Thanks - hopefully I'll get back to it in a couple of weeks.
Review By [yuiop] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "IV" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
May be a while - work has to take a bit of priority for now.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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