Review of chapter "Preperations for War" from Sithspit
Review:
If they were speaking Russian, why did Willow say "danke", which is German, insteaf of "spaceeba"?
Review By [Sithspit] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preperations for War" from kayron
Review:
WOW! That was a lot packed into those five chapters! Yes both groups have changed due to their additions, but at the same time it seems as if they are the same people just MORE!! More mature. More resolved. More focussed on what needs to be done and how they need to get there. The British magical world has been taken over by Voldemort, his Deatheaters, and their supporters at this point. The bad guys are going to be in for a major shock when they have to face this powerful group of people, who are more than capable of fighting all out against them. No more half measures on the good guys part, that allows team evil to jump right back up and kill wantonly! THESE particular good guys will put Voldie and his group down permanently! I'm looking forward to this potential faceoff. I'm also curious to see what the Watchers Council might attempt to do about Buffy and her team leaving. I don't think it would go well for the Council.
Review By [kayron] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This story is still going great! I love the fact that Halloween didn't superpower any of them, and that it has real consequences. I can see Harry helping Buffy like that, and the mental anguish of the rest. Keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
"Let's go," the [blonde] ordered her friends who nodded and followed their friend out Angel was the last to leave and followed after the group Willy sighed as he leaned against the bar there had definitely been something different about the group tonight and that didn't count the fact that they hadn't just come in here swinging and demanding answers like they usually did.
********** In chapter 1 you have Buffy having black hair so unless she dyed it again you need to change it.
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Good fic so far.
Comments from author:
Reread the second paragraph and you'll see that I did make mention of that fact.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Obligatory First Meeting Fight" from Darksnider
Review:
Man this is a marvel fic look at the needless stupid drama completely invalidating any chance of mistaking any of them for being competent adults ever.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Great costume choices for all. I am hoping for more and it could be funny if Logan or Xanders sniper rifle is the power he knows not to defeat Voldie. Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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