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Review of chapter "Halloween" from LFW
Review:
Nice character pick from LoTR for Xander and Willow.
I am looking forward to more as I am not sure if they can stand the Hellmouth.
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Vilkath
Review:
A very interesting choice and honestly one the few LoTR xovers I have seen that did not involve dumping the characters in middle earth. Be funny if Xander and willow buy up some out of town farming area and making their own elven forest. It might take time but was it not said the forest grew as large and powerful as it did because the land was infused wiht the power of the elves? I could see it taking a lot of time, complex rune work and what not but it be interesting.

Xander should also retain some of the elven metal working skills, Elrond is the guy who repaired the broken sword in the books/movie after all. Repairing a master work like that to it's proper strength takes more skill than making one really
Comments from author:
It's been a while, but I think that Elrond gave the sword to the smiths, rather than smithing it himself. Also, they have two of the rings that helped heal/maintain the land. Actually, that's an interesting thought - the influence of the rings on the Hellmouth...

Have to think about that
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
Nice work. I really enjoyed this opening chapter and do hope there is more to come.
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oh, my! This was an excellent beginning. I definitely look forward to reading more of your story. A mixture of Elf and Witch, Willow is going to be so powerful. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from borgrabbit
Review:
Great first chapter! May your muse encourage you.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from SFBKludge
Review:
Pretty good start.
Bringing in two of the Three is going to be the ancient Chinese curse.

My biggest concern is Ethan just doesn't have the power level even channeling through the Janus bust to power either of their personal power pools. let alone the Rings. Something else must be afoot. If A/W lapse in their power cloaking they will either scare off or attract anything that could even remotely detect them.


BTW its minor nit. But Tolkien Elves don't understand our concept of "magic". You can see that when the Fellowship are setting off by boat. I can't come up with the exact quote but It was when Sam commented about the quality and suppleness of ropes.

Galadriel also commented about not understanding Frodo's magic when she was showing him her mirror.
Review By [SFBKludge] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from WolfWriter
Review:
Drooooooooollllll! I have to wipe the slobber off of the screen in order to write this review! I love it! I love it! I LOVE IT! Can ya tell I love it?

Xander as Elrond; I kind of had him pegged as Legolas, but what the hey? This might be even better.

How is the Hyena going to deal with an Elf-Lord? If she has any brains, she will bugger off while the getting is good, and disappear. I can't wait to see Xan/Elrond deal with the wretched goblin that is Snyder! That is going to be a verbal smackdown of epic proportions. Not to mention what he can now do to vampires! He will more than likely chew Angel out for his obssession with a teenager and either kick him to the curb or take his head preemptively.

As for Willow, turning her into Galadriel is something new. I don't know if there are any stories here that deal with her turning into an Elf-Lady, much less Galadriel. She, of course, will now be more than able to defend herself against Queen C and her flock of sheep.

Giles, who I have always pegged as a closet Tolkien fiend, will be more than a bit flummoxed as to how to deal with these two, and the fact that they probably know more about the origins of the Slayer than he does, but he will deal with it.

As for Ethan; he needs therapy in the worst way. First a good butt kicking from any of the three I have just mentioned; but Giles gets dibs.

Buffy will have the most problems; she's used to people being a certain way, and now that Willow and Xander have changed so completely, she is going to find it EXTREMELY hard to adapt to that.

I look forward to more chapters of this little tale.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Tjin
Review:
VEEEEERY Interesting... of course with his new looks Xander is probably going to have to kill Larry to keep him away...
Review By [Tjin] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from zafaran
Review:
Oh, this is going to be so good if the following chapters live up to this first one. Well done so far. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from purrfus
Review:
Fascinating. The character set ups and the acknowledgment of loss are very nicely done.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from espinosaca
Review:
Ooh, me like. Please more.
Review By [espinosaca] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from norgco
Review:
Good chapter, I look forward to more.

The personality changes in the two should be interesting. From my limited knowledge of the characters they will never be the people they were will they? At the time of the trilogy Elrond is over 3,000 years old and Galadrial nearly 1400, both powerful and wise rulers, right? Giles is no longer the wise elder in the group is he, how will he handle that?

So Willow won't let her ego overtake her good sense in her magic, and Xander will have the self confidence and study ethic he lacked previously. Neither will ever think like a teenager again, will they?

Also they are not biologically human, or that is the implication I see.

It should be an interesting story.
Comments from author:
Apparently, by the time they sail into the West, they are 6500 and 7000 yo respectively, and, yes, they had ruled their own people for a very long time. Oh, and Galadriel is Elrond's mother-in-law, but I'm making the relationship between Xander and Willow fraternal.
Review By [norgco] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from winddancer
Review:
Interesting premise, has the makings of a good read. I look foreword the the coming chapters. Well done, Author, as usual.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [winddancer] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Wolflady
Review:
Love how 'Elrond' zinged Cordelia! Liked her response to same zing. I think this story will do well.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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