Nicely done. Chapters where characters cope in the aftermath are frequently dry. This one was very touching without being trite. Thanks for the new chapter!
I didn't find this chapter boring at all. Was a little surprised at how well they all took Willow's explanation, but I suppose that after what they had seen, the expo was pretty tame and surprisingly easy to accept.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Well that went better than expected. Brennan didn't even freak out. Though there will be additions to the album when they find Parker and Willow in bed together...
Thanks for writing
Review By [vidicon] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm really enjoying this story. I liked this last chapter-you needed to have Willow explain to the Smithsonian gang and I think you did a pretty good job of it. The only other thing I think you could have added was Bones questioning everything and asking for proof, but I wasn't really expecting it as throughout the fic you've focused mainly on Booth and Willow. Looking forward to the rest!
Review By [LJG] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
“For you,” she whispered as she began to drift back into a deep slumber, “I will be anything... even a Slayer.”
Now THAT line is one I wouldn't have expected Season 3 Willow to say. Maybe Season 5 Willow, to tara, but not Season 3. However... the character development she has had in your fic, plus her relationship with her baby brother, combined with that line, made me think back, and realize that this Willow has actually become stronger inside than Canon Willow. So... does this mean she'll end up being just as strong a caster, but without her fall to the Dark Side? Is she giving up magic except for emergencies? And... does tara go to MIT instead of UCSunnydale, this time? :D
Review By [Valandar] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
it's nice to see that the gang made it.... they survived graduation day... it won't be easy for Willow to come clean but she will make it... can't wait to read more :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Okay, so I read the entire thing and I love it. I was afraid it'd be pretty crappy, but you surprised me! It's really awesome and I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read The Talk. You'll have to show proof, of course, so Brennan and Zack will believe her. I can see Cam already knowing 'cause she lived in NY for awhile. I also can imagine Angela having running into the friendly demons once or twice in her life. Maybe even Lorne.
Anyways, I love this story and I can't wait for you to update!
LovelyLucy
Review By [LovelyLucy] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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