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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from VillageOrchid
Interesting... still no picture?

Essentially, since they don't have google or other search engines.... I'm sure the name Seely Booth turned up in some crime reporter's article (and the fact he was an FBI agent) - you might instead go back and change the dates so that the stuff happening on Bones is earlier. Like the TV show is based on the "real" characters who had these cases a decade ago or something like that.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
I've only watched a few episodes of Bones... did you make up the mother character or was she from a back story in an episode?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Continues to be interesting and a nice divergance in the Buffy-verse from relentless dark.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Okay your author notes helped. Good narrative style and nice characterization so far.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
An unexpected starting point in the continuity. Are they meant to be high school juniors or seniors in this story?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AriaDragoncrest
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
So, either the picture of Booth online is wrong, or we're skipping the part about him and Angel looking the same.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AllenPitt
It's going to be quite a shock if they find a picture of him online. I don't suppose there's any way to get Angel to go along with them to meet him? Or maybe they contact him and he flies out to Sunnydale, maybe with Brennan along? (at first chapter I thought W. was going to turn out to be Brennan's kid, but this works out better).
Got to wonder if maybe Seeley is a descendant of Angel's somehow... And hey, Willow has a kid (half) brother!
Brennan would be impressed with Willow --brilliant student, has done autopsies etc....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from PATM
Outside of rage against Willows parents and a vague coroners report
about remains in a cave equals suicide this is a good read. Seeley Booth
as love 'em and leave 'em tells me you have a lot of covering reasons and
revealing truths to get through before you wrap this one up. EDIT 11/09/10.
I realize during a reading of the reviews that it seems that I have doubts
about the plot hints I mentioned above. Sorry about that. Please update soon!
Review By [PATM] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from enfranr
I'm loving it so far! Can't wait to read more! :)
Review By [enfranr] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)DonSample
A couple of notes on names.

1: No one ever called Willow "Wills" at any time during the series. They would sometimes call her "Will."

2: Xander never reuses any of the nicknames he bestows on people. He uses them once, and move on. He called Giles "G-Man" just once. He called Angel "Deadboy" just once. We never heard him use any sort of nickname for Willow or Cordelia, probably because he ran out of new ideas for things to call them years ago. In the first couple of seasons he came up with a few one-shot nicknames for Buffy, but from season 3 on, she was Buffy or Buff. He had a couple of nicknames for Dawn in season 5, but after that, she was just Dawn.
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Angelfirenze
SEELEY FREAKIN' BOOTH AND YOU LEAVE IT THERE? You are truly the stuff of evil. I...gah. This needs to be updated yesterday because this cliffhanger is just cruel, damn it.

There are some terminology slip-ups regarding the fact that Willow's an American and we use different names for things and I haven't the faintest clue where you're from -- Um, a...texta, was it? I assume that's a permanent marker? Stuff like that. But it's easy enough to figure out eventually.

Another thing. Jesse's name was spelled thusly. You're utilizing the feminine version for a male character.

Other than that, this was just beyond brilliant, especially considering I haven't watched much -- if any -- of Bones at all. You've pulled me in. Bravo!
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
I've never liked the Rosenburgs. I can't imagine Mrs. Summers not reporting them to Child Services if Willow comes to live with her and Buffy. I wonder what having their daughter taken away for neglect would do to their careers?
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AriaDragoncrest
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MarcusSLazarus
Hoo boy...

I have to wonder who'll be more surprised at the meeting; Booth when he learns that he has a teenage daughter- judging by the dating I'm assuming that he shipped out and was hence unaware of Willow's birth-, or Willow when she learns that her father is the exact double of her best friend's boyfriend (Given the timings I feel safe assuming that this isn't an 'Angel-becomes-Booth'-style crossover.

Hope you update soon; I DEFINITELY look forward to the next chapter (Oh, and the possibility of Booth's reaction when he learns that his daughter is essentially a 'squint-in-training' should be good as well)
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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