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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Harry
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UH OH CHONGO! Trouble is brewing and its not going to be good. With Faith's Slayer dream, and the Medj arriving, things are going to hit the fan and soon! BIG TIME!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
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FINALLY! The Sunnydale PD is showing what they REALLY think of the Slayer. And they are ready to back her to the hilt!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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Well, when Andrea said she was going to call in a shrink, she wasn't kidding. And this one got her horizon's broadened BIG TIME! Now, lets see what she can do for Faith.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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OH LORD! This is starting to sound like Old Friends time! First Benton, now Sarah Jane Smith. Next thing you know, a certain gentleman known only as The Doctor will be coming in, with K-9. *Shakes head* I know, I know, I'm a Doctor Who fan. But this is starting to SOUND like one!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
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Mary Pat being given THAT title? OH BOY! Things in Sunnydale must be hotter than we thought!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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Well, Jack Ryan's deal with Anya went over well. A loan at 3% interest? That is a SWEETHEART deal! And using the treasury departments Forensic Accounts to find the Watchers Council accounts is a very nice offer. But I think I know what the First meant by family. Looks like Hank is coming back to Sunnydale. And he might be just the first.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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I agree with Andrea's philosophy of protecting her boss. Better to have it now and not need it than not to have it and need it, especially in a town like Sunnydale.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Holtzman may be smelling more than a regular story. He might want to talk to his friend at Fox about working on this. Those two would make a good team to work hand in hand together.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Imhotep's Key" from Harry
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Nice Recap of what went on with the first story. Now, on with the sequel!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from HMaxMarius
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Oh, I was so thoroughly enjoying the story until I hit /this/ mistake...

University of North Carolina
Raleigh NC
29Oct2004
1125 hrs

As a loyal fan of the Wolfpack and a major hater of the Tarheels I must say either of the following would have been acceptable:

North Carolina State University
Raleigh NC

OR

University of North Carolina
Chapel Hill NC

As I recall, Clancy used UNC for the NG officer but the officer used the NCState mascot for unit call signs (and acknowledged the discrepancy)


Seriously, am loving the fic, you did an excellent job of integrating the Buffyverse into the Jack Ryan universe and especially have done well in capturing Clancy's style.

hmm
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Imhotep's Key" from vitruvian
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Quite liked this story. However, you do realize that by bringing Purdey into things, you thereby make the robotics expert from the next story quite a bit behind the times, since not only could Warren Mears create April and the Buffybot, but in fact the technology to make lifelike autonomous robots goes way, way back to at least 1965, when Steed and Peel first encountered the Cybernauts. The fact that the Cybernauts worked as well as they did also mitigates against the possibility of the Buffybot requiring proximity to a Hellmouth to work, too.
Review By [vitruvian] • Date [31 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from (Current Donor)vladt
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very enjoyable read, thank you. interesting blend of characters.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from burmafrdnow
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Love this series. One quibble I have is showing Ginger at the end - no way the First will stay as a dog and remember that he/it is insubstantial and that will get noticed sooner or later. So how can you keep ginger around at all?
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [4 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Ansku
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Good story :) I hope it will get another part at some point in the future :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Lady
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I had just been read this one again when I spotted there was an extra bit on the end. Great to see you have updated. Sad that this part has finished. Really hoping you have lots of free time to write the next part asap I will be watching out for it.. The has had some great twists and turns. Hope you have a great summer!
Review By [Lady] • Date [18 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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