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Review of chapter "Graduation Day, Part 3" from VillageOrchid
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I like this concept:
Did you know having a good foundation in akkadian really helps with any semitic language?

She was taking a class that you needed to be in your third year for, so that means she finished 2 years of college. Was that enough time to learn enough of the language that they drafted her into active duty on?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad Minute" from DieselDriver
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"What are you?"

"Me? I'm just a grunt."

Or, how to demoralize the enemy in one easy lesson. I laughed a lot thinking of what's going through the Taliban guy's mind after hearing that.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Combined Arms" from DieselDriver
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Heh! Timing is everything. Reads very well. Good Job!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Augmentation Personnel" from DieselDriver
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Eeewwww! No wonder the jaws are missing from all those skulls.

Still, I find it difficult to believe that my Redhawk couldn't put a serious damper on that thing's hunger and ability to feed. I did put a hole in my father's target, a 5/8" steel plate on pivots. I kept that part of the target to use as a conversation piece/paperweight. A 30-06 (7.62mm diameter bullet) with military steel spire point bullets should go right through the "armor". However, that point is moot because the unit is probably equipped with 5.56 Nato firing weapons. The AK's might be 30 cal but if they are it's probably a 7.62 X 39 which has a substantially lower muzzle velocity than a 30-06.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After Action Report" from DieselDriver
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“Who the hell names their daughter Buffy?”

Always good for a laugh when I try to picture the astonished or similar looks on their faces when the ask that.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Over There" from DieselDriver
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Hmmm, sounds like they are specifically after Buffy.

Almost forgot this: "was a bloodline descendent of Muhammad" doesn't make him any different than any other Muslim. They are still going to all go to Hell for their sins. Muhammad was a child molester and I believe that he started Islam to have a sanction for his perversions.

I am a Christian and believe I am saved. However, I differ in opinion from most Christians who are taught that death especially the second death spoken of in many places, that this is merely separation from God. It does say in Revelations that the sinners will all be thrown into the lake of everlasting fire and suffer the second death. I believe that God would not be so cruel as to punish someone forever. I believe that the sinners final punishment is the burning up and complete destruction of their souls. So death is dead. Not alive separate from God.

Good story. Good story telling.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gender Misassignment" from DieselDriver
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Hey! If it's good reading I don't care if it's crossover or not. This is good reading aside from a few typos and misused words. "more colder" is an especially egregious example of that. And compared to some of the other authors it would count as extremely minor. So no biggee! Looking forward to reading the rest of it. Besides, some crossovers are worthless to me because I don't know anything about the other story line and sometimes, the story just doesn't make sense to me because of that. Your writing is quite good and I'll eventually end up reading most if not all of it that I can find. I may criticize but it's meant to help.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad Minute" from deathgeonous
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I've always loved this series, and now it's time to rec the first one in it! Oh, and sorry, but I only rec one fic in a series, due to rec limits. Well, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gender Misassignment" from DieselDriver
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Hey! If the story is good, and this is, we don't need no stinking crossover!!! LOL
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Graduation Day, Part 3" from vitruvian
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I wouldn't think that the energy the Mayor was accumulating had to go anywhere, really. His body didn't transform back into his human form after he got blown up, so all the mass-energy was still contained in the chunks of giant snake lying all over the place.
Comments from author:
What is this foolish logic you're spouting?
Review By [vitruvian] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad Minute" from starwolf
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A very original ideal carried out extremely well. this is a must read series.
thanks for the stories, will be looking eagerly for more
Review By [starwolf] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad Minute" from unicornzvi
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Very nice, making contact with the taliban was a bit too smooth IMO but I really liked everything else.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [8 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gender Misassignment" from unicornzvi
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I would have sworn this can't exist. I mean a BtVS military focused story that actually has a believable depiction of the military?
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [8 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad Minute" from deathgeonous
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Ah, now this is a good series. It's one of your weirder series, but that doesn't make it any less good. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad Minute" from (Current Donor)Listener
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This was really quite good. I don't know if you're in the military or just really good at research, but the setting and props were immersive and, from what I've heard from the army people I know, you did a good job with Buffy’s inner voice. If anything was worth a criticism, it was that I don't know if I buy Buffy being THAT good at languages. Of course, we never did see how she did in French class...

Good stuff overall. Looking forward to reading the next one.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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