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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from link
Review:
I love the this action packed chapter. Great update.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [link] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Sweet
Review:
Oh man, you had to leave it there?! You're mean.

Awesome update!
Comments from author:
LOL!! Thank you!
Review By [Sweet] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Rather interesting, I stopped watching Bleach in the middle of Season 2, but this is looking good.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

I went a little nuts watching all the seasons of Bleach. Damn YouTube.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from froggy
Review:
I love how it’s starting out,

but I wish you made willow go to Japan a few years after she went all dark willow and try to end the world.

But still good you must pare Urahara and Willow together.
Comments from author:
Why, thank you very much.

I know what you mean about wanting to see her with her dark side already in place, but I thought it would be cool to have go with a some what clean slate.

I've got to tell you the truth, I cringed at first at the pairing, but almost instantly it grabbed my attention.
Review By [froggy] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadohime
Review:
Interesting take on a Bleach/Buffy crossover.

Couple of things, though. One, Orihime wasn't aware of what Ichigo was at this point in time, so she couldn't have been surprised at Willow seeing him. Two, the day Orihime and Chad learned about Ichigo was the same day the Gillian showed up. You make it seem like they were on different days. Not only that, but Uryuu had released hollow bait into the atmosphere, so I'm fairly certain Willow would have had a Hollow after her. Would have been cool to see her slice a hollow with her new dagger.

Other than that, you're off to a fairly nice start, here. Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you and lol.

I think you just hit every nail I was having trouble with on the head. I thought about having her go against a hollow, but thought it was too soon, she hasn't made that transition from scooby to reaper yet, you know?

And I know I fudged a few facts with Orihime and Chad, but I wanted Willow to start school just before the Gillian attacked, so she could have at least one normal day of school before shoving her into the reaper business.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [5 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from link
Review:
I love your new fic. I think it's great to see how Willow cope with this new development without the usual Scooby gang. Keep churning out new chapters. I'm excited to read it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [link] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
Interesting, I think this is the first Bleach/Buffy crossover I've read with Willow as the main character. So Willow 2, Hollow 0, not bad little red witch. And said witch I'm guessing got her hands on a Zanpakto, and Hat-and-Clogs knows something. Anyway great start can't wait to see how this will go ~GraysonPaladin
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Too right, about Hat-and-Clogs and that she got herself a Zanpaktou.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Great beginning. Question

There was a biting sting on her hand and Willow felt something deep within her swell and then snap, and she fell into the blessed blackness of being unconscious.

I'm not that familar with the anime, could Willow's experience at Halloween have affected her link with her soul?
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Actually, that's a great question. I am going to use her ghostly experience on Halloween, to sort of loosen her link with her soul, but not just that. And if you're ever interested, you can find pretty much the entire series of Bleach on You Tube.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
interesting start looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Why thank you. I should have it up soon.
Review By [war] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fansick
Review:
This is a great first chapter I was so into the story that the end of it startled me. Can't wait for the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [fansick] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ramenth
Review:
Huh, interesting. I haven't seen this plot before, it looks quite good. Only one thing jumped out as needing fixing, which is Season 2 (Angelus and all that) would be Willow's Junior year, not Sophomore.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Yeah, the time line was giving me a bunch of problems, so I had Buffy coming to Sunnydale in their freshman year instead of their sophomore year. I originally was gonna have her moving because of the Hansel and Gretal demon in season 3, but then there was the whole ordeal with the Willow kissing Xander and Cordelia getting impaled. So, I messed with the time line a bit.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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