Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from minijo
Brilliant, love the reflection in this. Vampires are predators, that prey on humans and Jack O'Neill would have a problem with that. Hope you write a sequel maybe a compromise can be made, maybe a cure to the hunger can be found, because killing a species isn't what Jack is about, he's there to protect the Earth, and let's face it if a way to utilise vampires to help protect the planet was found, who would have a problem with that. Now I'm going to go and REC this if I remember how.
Oh and thank you for the mini-Jack fic, it's been a while since I've read any new ones.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Jack definitely has a problem and he won't ever get over it. The way I view it, Jack will do everything he can now to protect humans simply because he won't be able to live with himself otherwise. So, he's going to find a way to do that as a vampire.
I actually have another mini-Jack fic set in Twilight 'verse, based around the wolves, but that one is far far far from being completed.
Thank you for the rec. :D
Review By [minijo
] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from MarcusSLazarus
Intriguing idea, to say the least; I DEFINITELY have to wonder how things are going to progress from here...
I liked "Twilight" as a concept, but some of the characters DEFINITELY made some 'ambiguous' decisions, and Jack's reaction to his new state and the consequences of it as a result were definitely effective (To say nothing of the implications of his theory about the scientific explanation for vampires in the SG-'verse).
Any chance of more stories in this series?
I'm not sure what I'm more intrigued at the possibility of seeing, really; SG-1's reaction when they learn what happened to Jack, their reaction to learning about the existence of vampires, or maybe even the possibility that alien technology might be able to 'cure' vampires (Maybe a sarcophagus could get rid of the 'virus', or the Asgard could reverse the genetic changes, or something like that...)?
Comments from author:
Thank you. The reason I wrote this fic is because of the huge issues I had with the characters (namely Bella and her choice). I truly hated that she didn't things worked out so perfectly for her.
As for a sequel, definitely not straight away. It was such an intense fic to write that by the time I got around to posting it I had a love/hate relationship with it. That being said, when I did finish it I writing I gave my beta a short description of what Jack was intending to do at the end of the fic so I might eventually write that.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]