Review of chapter "Blood Under the Bridge" from Karis
Review:
okay, she prosecutes hi for defending himself, and then tells him "dont worry you will never need to do this" she says history never happened and then tells them not to tell lies given she thren takes any excuse to torment/torture him, I am not sure she wasnt somehow in a dark lords employ
(dont get me started on the whole series' mixed messages to kids)
Good story she got what she deserved (not sure if this is continueing, if so it will be interesting)
Comments from author:
Yeah, that was one of the more frustrating things about Umbridge and her there will be no danger message. There were also lots of mixed messages and some outright disturbing ones in the whole series... (-preemptive rant snippage-)...
There was one good message: the world isn't divided into nice people and Death eaters. While there aren't really Death Eaters (meaning the magical marked minions of Voldemort), the idea that everyone in the world can't be sorted neatly into good guys and bad guys IS a good and accurate one.
Thank you.
Review By [Karis] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Under the Bridge" from Sandi
Review:
Mama Liiike! Excellent job. Now Dumbledore has a problem. The Ministry assigned DADA teacher has vanished and most of the school knows Harry had detention with her. I'm of course assuming Dobby is good at cleaning up messes.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad that you liked the story : )
Dumbledore has a lot of problems. Ohhh, you mean about the Defense position & Umbridge's Ministry ties.
Yes, Dobby will make sure that the office is spotlessly clean. Otherwise Dobby shall iron his ears. (Dobby learned a few lessons from bad masters Malfoy.)
Review By [Sandi] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Under the Bridge" from draconis
Review:
If the story hadn't ended, I'd say Harry and Dobby should spin it so that Voldemort and/or Lucius takes the fall.
Let's add a bit of deviousness to Harry's repertoire.
Review By [draconis] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Under the Bridge" from MyTia
Review:
A captivating story! Disturbing, but in a strange way absolutely right - what else could Harry do but battle the monster?
Review By [MyTia] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Under the Bridge" from cwolf
Review:
This should be interesting to continue. On a slight note... Rowling announced in an interview that she was thinking of continuing on after the 7th book with more Harry Potter novels.