Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from Shadowman
Review:
Nice. A very intense and good chapter, I am looking forward to much more from this series.
Comments from author:
Thank you!!! :D This was one fun chap to write! :D
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from morgyair
Review:
I loved everyone's responses!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I tried keeping to everyone's personalities :)
Review By [morgyair] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from JennRosbury
Review:
I LOVE this series I am very much looking forward to more!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank YOU!!! Love knowing ppl love this fic!!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Four" from bradsan
Review:
About time the minni's are getting an eye opener about Buffy. She is one of the best Slayers in history as not the best Slayer in history. Thank you Faith for telling them."LOL" even the Scoobies didn't knew everything. They always underestimated Buffy it will do her good that they know now that they can't put her in a cage to keep her save.
You do know that even Buffy doesn't care about titles she is gone get one. The minni's are gone nick name her. They are teenagers and they love to do that. How about Queen Buffy and princess Faith because when Buffy will be Queen, Faith is gone be the princess. Oh, they will both hate it, getting that as a title. I'm hoping for something like that.
Buffy can give away her title as head slayer but you can't give away something that you are, even if you want to. She already showed it in Rio and the minni's saw her giving orders and how the rest followed them. So you can't give anything away that you are because you don't want it.
Can't wait for more. Good as always, again thank you.
Comments from author:
I alwasy thought that they gave Buffy too little credit. in the show it was always Willow the brain Giles the Mentor Xander the unexpected etc...
But she's not stupid. The short time she was in Uni she did pretty well. Plus, she showed with keeping her family mum on her being in heaven, that she can keep a secret. Also people tended to miss the obvious when they have a great idea, so I thought it made sense for B to do some recon. She didn't need backup.
I've kind of put Buffy into a consulting roll in the Council. The one people go to for advice and occasionally ask help from.
Glad you liked this chap. There is a reason its here, even if its kind of small in the bigger scheme of things...
Anyways, next stop... Dawn ;)
Thanks for the review!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from bradsan
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I didn't know Han but that's because I didn't saw that movie. Good chapter and can't wait for the next one.
And I do so not like Kennedy darn that girl is real brat. I hope they are finding out more in the next chapter what this is all about. Why can't I shake the feeling that Kennedy was in it the first time Buffy get kidnapped.
oh when there are more humans involved to get Buffy down they don't know what they get in to. Buffy's family is going bigger and bigger. Lets face it her growing family are dangerous and won't take it well when something is happening to Buffy and won't take it well if they try to do something to her that can harm or hurt. Look what happened the second time she got kidnapped.
I hope Buffy will know her parents before she gets her baby.
well don't wait to long.
Comments from author:
It's okay, not everyone knows Han. I'm cool with it. I'm a fan.
For the life of me i can't understand what Willow saw in Kennedy in season 7, that girl was spoilt beyound reason. Anyways, there was no doubt for me if I needed a bad Slayer that I would use her.
I'm just setting things up for later... Let's just say that this didn't neccessarily had to happen, but it was fun writing it anyways. There is an outline I have of what I wanted to happen later in Charming that ties in with Season 4 of SOA... And this chapter give a bit of a start. :P
I'm still not sure I want her to find out before the baby or after. Leanning towards the later, because of something that came to me and I wrote it.
Thats all for now1 :) Thanks for reading!!!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from liit
Review:
Hi i know this will sound a stupid question but who is Han? I'm coming out blank. please clarify ur avid reader ;)
Comments from author:
lol
Okay. The best way to describe him would be the Asian dude in the Fast and furious series he made appearence from the third one onwards.
Like I said his background is a bit blank, from the movies all i know is that at one stage he co owned a garage with Dom, helped him jack oil trucks. Dom implied that he is a Chameleon, whoc can blend in anywhere. It's one of the characteristics that I like about this character. Of course I'm going to make him a bit more than the movies. It's the fun of fan fic. :)
He also did a stint in Japan which he supposedly died at. Ya, Something I'll touch on later.
I hope this clears out for you a bit. Or if you have time watch FF5 (2011), Fast and Furious (2009) and FF Tokyo (2006) drift.
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from kittenpoker
Review:
I actually really like Han/Buffy! It wasn't something I'd ever thought of before, but I love it. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
I know! I never thought about it either, and then I was looking for someone to pair Buffy with and I looked at some of the fandoms I like and Han popped up. He's just so chilled, and i thought it would be different to all the others that she's been paired with. So why not.
Thanks! :D
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from Discord
Review:
I suspected Han after the previous chapter and I'm so so happy it is him! Love Han. Can't wait for whatever backstory you come up with for him and Buffy :) Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
:D Well there were crumbs which I left behind, but I've been careful! lol LIke I said there's no back story with the Han in the Movies, so I figured why not. He's story will be told slowly come out bit by it :)
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Discord] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from JennRosbury
Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from Nightscream
Review:
Soooo Buffy's going to try to be a mom huh? Interesting I can't wait to read more so I hope your proof reading those chapters now. :D
Comments from author:
:D I like Buffy mommy fics, which there isn't a lot of. Or I'm just not finding them.
There are just some changes I need to do because of changes in past chapters. But it's written. Just me making sure it's written right. :)
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from bradsan
Review:
Hello evil and sneaky one.
I was scared you forget about this story. It's been so long (this is me being impatient). Forget about the mistakes you made in the wording updating is more important(this is me being selfish).
I'm a little confused about the parenting because Dawn has to have one parent the same as Buffy, you wrote they are siblings, that would be Clay because I can't see Gemma giving a child away. On the other hand the way how you wrote Clay I can't see him cheating on Gemma. So I'm a little bit confused.
You wrote originally she died but they altered the memory from the mother that she didn't die but survived and give her up to adoption. Did I read that right. To me that part is a bit confusing but it will be all be cleared hopefully in the next chapter.
Well I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
:D Hmmm, the idea is to get you guessing! lol
But to clarify: - Buffy and Dawn are half siblings - There's an explanation in how Dawn came to be later and if you read my past chapters you can figure out when she was concieved. - Originally the mother signed the papers for Dawn's adoption, but changed her mind last minute and left with Dawn. Something happened and Dawn died. They took her before her death and implanted new memories for those involved. So the mother thinks that she gave up Dawn for adoption and didn't change her mind.
I hope this clears some things up. Thanks for reviewing! :D
PS: If I don't decide to add a random chapter I haven't written yet, there should be another chapter soon. :)
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from morgyair
Review:
I LOVED the update...and good job!`
Comments from author:
Thank you Thank You!!!!!
Glad you liked it! I was a bit skeptical how this chapter was going to be viewed!
:D
Review By [morgyair] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from divaslayer
Review:
I like this story a lot, but there are quite a few spelling mistakes that makes it hard to read. I can't wait to see where you take this story next.
Dani
Comments from author:
Ya, I've noticed myself, especially in the beginning, I need to have more free time to fix the other chaps. So I might do that when I have a holiday again which amy not happen till the end of the year.
anyways. thanks for the review!
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from JennRosbury
Review:
Ok first I want to apologize....the button does not go past 10...so think if it as a 10 x 10 from me.... Awesome story I LOVE the crossovers...I am a old BTVS Fan a HUGE F&F fan and a new convert to SOA....
Cannot WAIT to see where you go next with this :)
Jenn
Comments from author:
:D Thanks!!!
I'm a bit stuck at ht emoment, I do have the next chapter done... But I'm sitting on it deciding if I want it to go this way for this section. :)
Will try to update soon
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]