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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from bradsan
Review:
You know you are mean don't ya. Leaving hints about Buffy's medical problems with her birth while Clay is listening but not revealing anything. Darn you have a wicked mind. Glad you use it this way "LOL".

Can't wait for the next chapter. Glad you updated this soon.

edit: did I said mean. You are evil. I have to read it again. A well I think I do the whole story again.
Comments from author:
While the things you picked up is interesting there's somehting else in that chap that hints at where I'm taking one of the characters... A small one, but it's there ;P

Thanks for the review!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from JennRosbury
Review:
Love it and love seeing more SOA/Buffy interaction!
Comments from author:
THank you!!!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from randyzoopurple
Review:
I cant wait for them to find out shes their kid.
Comments from author:
Heeheehee I so want to comment. But will give things away ;)
Thanks for the review!!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from bradsan
Review:
I read the last 4 chapters again to be sure I missed nothing. Then suddenly Anubis the dog came in. Don't tell me I missed something.

"giggle" go Buffy showing up with Han on the last moment and then falling asleep. It's the best way to avoid questions.

It sucks when you can't use one of your hands especially the one you used the most. I hope all gets better now.

Love it and can't wait for the next chapter.

edit: Ah I found the meeting with Anubis.
Comments from author:
LOL I should've added a note at the end of the chap telling people where to go if they wanted to know where Anubis came from. Oh well

Originally the new chap at Moving forward was the chap I was going to introduce Han, but then this chapter came to be and it just made more sense. I contemplated putting that chapter here in the Past, but it seemed too much, so I decided to add to the Moving Forward.

The next few chapters you aren't going to see many of the Buffy characters, I'm going back to SOA. Things are about to get interesting ;)

Thanks for reading!!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from JennRosbury
Review:
LOVE the story cannot wait for more and sorry that the button does not go past 10 cause higher would be better :)
Comments from author:
:D Love it when people loves it!!!

Thanks!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from vanimi
Review:
You are a very creative writer. When I first came across your story, it really was one of the better SOA crossovers I has read. It actually has some good plot and length. Lately though, there hasn't been really any evidence this is a SOA crossover anymore, no real interation with those characters in 10 chapter (almost 1/3 if your story so far). I really hope you start vbringibg the characters back in because I was really looking forward to some good SOA/Buffy crossover fiction.

Thanks for writing, and keep up with your creative plots though.
Comments from author:
Hey, the Sons characters will be back in a chap or two. I wasn't too sure about posting some of these chapters here, but I did hit a lull a bit back and it's either post these or post nothing at all.

I have how Clay finds out about Buffy and some of the scenes and how to play with some other stuff worked out. I even have how Buffy finds out (kind of) figured out.

The sons characters are coming back I promise. :)

But thanks for reading!
Review By [vanimi] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from bradsan
Review:
Glad you made it a long chapter instead of two short ones. I loved it even made my eyes wet.

Can't wait what you will write next.

Good as always.
Comments from author:
Awww I was hoping for a bit of teary eye.

Thank you for reading! :D
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from Shadowman
Review:
Nice. A very intense and good chapter, I am looking forward to much more from this series.
Comments from author:
Thank you!!! :D This was one fun chap to write! :D
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
I loved everyone's responses!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I tried keeping to everyone's personalities :)
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from JennRosbury
Review:
I LOVE this series I am very much looking forward to more!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank YOU!!! Love knowing ppl love this fic!!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Four" from bradsan
Review:
About time the minni's are getting an eye opener about Buffy. She is one of the best Slayers in history as not the best Slayer in history. Thank you Faith for telling them."LOL" even the Scoobies didn't knew everything. They always underestimated Buffy it will do her good that they know now that they can't put her in a cage to keep her save.

You do know that even Buffy doesn't care about titles she is gone get one. The minni's are gone nick name her. They are teenagers and they love to do that. How about Queen Buffy and princess Faith because when Buffy will be Queen, Faith is gone be the princess. Oh, they will both hate it, getting that as a title. I'm hoping for something like that.

Buffy can give away her title as head slayer but you can't give away something that you are, even if you want to. She already showed it in Rio and the minni's saw her giving orders and how the rest followed them. So you can't give anything away that you are because you don't want it.

Can't wait for more. Good as always, again thank you.
Comments from author:
I alwasy thought that they gave Buffy too little credit. in the show it was always
Willow the brain
Giles the Mentor
Xander the unexpected
etc...

But she's not stupid. The short time she was in Uni she did pretty well. Plus, she showed with keeping her family mum on her being in heaven, that she can keep a secret.
Also people tended to miss the obvious when they have a great idea, so I thought it made sense for B to do some recon. She didn't need backup.

I've kind of put Buffy into a consulting roll in the Council. The one people go to for advice and occasionally ask help from.

Glad you liked this chap. There is a reason its here, even if its kind of small in the bigger scheme of things...

Anyways, next stop... Dawn ;)

Thanks for the review!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from bradsan
Review:
I didn't know Han but that's because I didn't saw that movie. Good chapter and can't wait for the next one.

And I do so not like Kennedy darn that girl is real brat. I hope they are finding out more in the next chapter what this is all about. Why can't I shake the feeling that Kennedy was in it the first time Buffy get kidnapped.

oh when there are more humans involved to get Buffy down they don't know what they get in to. Buffy's family is going bigger and bigger. Lets face it her growing family are dangerous and won't take it well when something is happening to Buffy and won't take it well if they try to do something to her that can harm or hurt. Look what happened the second time she got kidnapped.

I hope Buffy will know her parents before she gets her baby.

well don't wait to long.
Comments from author:
It's okay, not everyone knows Han. I'm cool with it. I'm a fan.

For the life of me i can't understand what Willow saw in Kennedy in season 7, that girl was spoilt beyound reason. Anyways, there was no doubt for me if I needed a bad Slayer that I would use her.

I'm just setting things up for later... Let's just say that this didn't neccessarily had to happen, but it was fun writing it anyways. There is an outline I have of what I wanted to happen later in Charming that ties in with Season 4 of SOA... And this chapter give a bit of a start. :P

I'm still not sure I want her to find out before the baby or after. Leanning towards the later, because of something that came to me and I wrote it.

Thats all for now1 :) Thanks for reading!!!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from liit
Review:
Hi i know this will sound a stupid question but who is Han? I'm coming out blank. please clarify
ur avid reader ;)
Comments from author:
lol

Okay. The best way to describe him would be the Asian dude in the Fast and furious series he made appearence from the third one onwards.

Like I said his background is a bit blank, from the movies all i know is that at one stage he co owned a garage with Dom, helped him jack oil trucks. Dom implied that he is a Chameleon, whoc can blend in anywhere. It's one of the characteristics that I like about this character. Of course I'm going to make him a bit more than the movies. It's the fun of fan fic. :)

He also did a stint in Japan which he supposedly died at. Ya, Something I'll touch on later.

I hope this clears out for you a bit. Or if you have time watch FF5 (2011), Fast and Furious (2009) and FF Tokyo (2006) drift.

Thanks for reading! :)
Review By [liit] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from kittenpoker
Review:
I actually really like Han/Buffy! It wasn't something I'd ever thought of before, but I love it. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
I know! I never thought about it either, and then I was looking for someone to pair Buffy with and I looked at some of the fandoms I like and Han popped up. He's just so chilled, and i thought it would be different to all the others that she's been paired with. So why not.

Thanks! :D
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from Discord
Review:
I suspected Han after the previous chapter and I'm so so happy it is him! Love Han. Can't wait for whatever backstory you come up with for him and Buffy :) Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
:D Well there were crumbs which I left behind, but I've been careful! lol
LIke I said there's no back story with the Han in the Movies, so I figured why not. He's story will be told slowly come out bit by it :)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Discord] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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