Wow, i just spent the last good 18 hours or so ripping my way through the story. I love how outrageous this new version of the Harry potter universe you have created is. getting to see how potter plots his way through his new life is great and the little sneak peaks into his future is really hilarious. seeing how his master plan unfolds is really exciting. the only thing i find somewhat disconcerting is how the Angels are all so adult like. it's kidda freaky but if i keep trying to forget that they are in fact 11 and 12, it totally fits. so anyway, i love your work so will i be expecting an entire series with 7 stories in the future? cuz omg if you do, i would be going through life waiting for a new chapter to come out and probably nothing else.
New Big Fan, Ernestt
Review By [Ernestt] • Date [4 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Good chapter. Much added complications now, especially if Albus was there the whole time and heard what Harry said about him, but the main ones will probably come from Albus seeing Harry's awesome power, and Hermione demanding to know what's going on with Harry. And still the question remains: What use is Tracey, and more obviously, Daphne? Tracey may be useful as a Ravenclaw, and another smart girl, but Daphne - as I noted in the last review, her only use seems to be as a kinda Ginny-type figure - she doesn't have a crush, but she wants to marry him. At the same time, she's weaker than all the other girls with Harry, and apparently won't even have as much as a bust as them - so what's she in for?
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Not Rated
So Harry's dream comes mostly true and he kicks Volde butt most handily but he now has two sets of explanations waiting. I wonder if he can get Dumbledore to swear an unbreakable vow? And I bet Cherise will not be happy when he catches up with her.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Angelfirenze
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Wow, just...wow. I honestly can't think of anything to say here. You've left me blown away.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great cliffhanger. And interesting point that this world's version of Quirell-mort was stronger. Probably wasn't drinking the unicorn blood this time but doing something else. Lovely to see more of your work. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Oh I think the question should be "what the fuck is Dumbledore doing there" anyone would think he was hiding in the shadows waiting for Neville to confront Quirrel after setting a long and convoluted trap to bring them together to see if his 'weapon' could perform ... and can that NOT sound more like than an innuendo, and why didn't Harry think such an obvious setup could happen?
I can definitely see Dumbledore switching tracks now and believing Harry is the real target of the prophecy.
Dumbledalek says "MANIPULAAAAATE"
great story, 10/10
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from DigiEmissary
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"Now, in the ultimate moment of irony, Harry found himself sitting in the very chair where Neville had waited for him, Ron, and Hermione seven years and an alternate dimension ago."
That is a really great moment of role reversal, and it's such a natural outcome of the elements of the story. I'm looking forward to the end of first year and the start of second year.
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
When Harry said "One down, sixty three to go" after finishing Quirrellmort off, was that just a random number he used or did I miss something earlier in the story?
Comments from author:
One soul divided in half divided in half divided in half divided in half...
Review By [Bushido] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gryffindor vs Hufflepuff" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gryffindor vs Hufflepuff" from LordSia
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Cool fic. I think Harry's WAY too obsessed with fitting everyone into these little boxes he has for them, in spite of the fact that his current reality is markedly different from his old one. And he's not doing nearly enough to actually prevent the threat of Voldemort - if he's serious (no, not Sirius) about stopping the Second War before it can begin, here's an idea; use Proxies! Unbreakable oath for his father, create an organisation (Order of Whatever) and have his loving parents help him track down Horocruxes... Assuming that's what Voldemort used in this world. And we all know what "Assume" means.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gryffindor vs Hufflepuff" from borgrabbit
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"getting between the Weasley twins and the girls they liked was a bit too stupid even for his tastes…"
What does stupidity taste like? Is it lemony? Is it sweet, like ignorant bliss? Enquiring idiots want to know.
Harem scare-um ya'll Guys dreaming their fantasies Rain on the parade
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gryffindor vs Hufflepuff" from Angelfirenze
Review:
I have to say the Slytherin game was rather more fun because it was hilarious and there underhanded tactics galore, but this was definitely up to your usual standard of excellence and I can't wait to see what else happens.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
