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Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from fitzpatrick
Great story of the few good time travel stories that have been written and not become over the top or ridiculous please keep updating/continue this story.
Review By [fitzpatrick] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gryffindor vs. Slytherin" from draconis
Excellent last few chapters!

Hope we get more info on why Lara Ramsay was brought into picture. Character seems introduced kinda from out of left field.

The confrontation with Quirrell/Morty was much too short compared to all the lead-up to it. Was hoping for much more back-and-forth between Morty and Harry (although do I understand that Harry would likely want to conclude the fight ASAP because now he was facing Morty directly...instead of just Quirrell-puppet, still...a longer section would have been nice)

I'm curious...even though the soul-fragment was destroyed, will the rest of Morty know what transpired in this confrontation? (is there some mechanism by which experience/knowledge of 'fragments' is passed along to all the others?) So in the future will he know of this HIGHLY unusual display of magic by Harry, and the fact that Longbottom was kept from from appearing because Harry prevented it?

I'm also very much hoping that Harry (or Su or Hermione) will demand to know from Ddore why he arrived EXACTLY the moment Morty was being incinerated...or was he there for much of or even the entire time..."observing" (aka "not helping")?
Review By [draconis] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Thedruid
Must, have more! :)
Comments from author:
I'll see what I can do for you.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from waldo
love the way the story flows. I didn't realize what the italics was about until I started to read them the second time. Good move. I enjoyed the way you had me laughing at some of the silly stuff going on. Hope to see more soon
Review By [waldo] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from DofEire
On a scale from 1-10, I'd give you a series of 10s if the system allowed it: one for plot, one for execution, one for the introduction of 'Harry Plotter', and one for sheer bloody brilliant humor.

Well done once again.
Comments from author:
Heh, thanks. Wait till you see what I do next.
Review By [DofEire] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from banner
Man, that combat scene with QuirrellMort is just as exciting the second time I read it. I love this rewrite of the series - you've taken all the canon events and changed them just enough to be fresh and new again.
Comments from author:
I'm working up something even better for the next time...
Review By [banner] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Gideon
Nice finishing spell by Harry, but that will really have raised some serious questions in Dumbledor's mind. His light side credentials should not be in question though since he has just killed a part of Voldmort's soul. Just his true identity, power level and everything else :) Unbreakable vows all around then?
I don't think Dumbledor will mind keeping a few more secrets to himself, but good luck to Harry getting anything in return.
If everyone does move into the Manor for quiditch camp that will put a serious cramp in the plans of Harry's parents and their significant others. maybe Lily and James can go on Holiday "together" for the duration?
Comments from author:
Well, it wouldn't be a stay-over camp. Day camp. So James and Sheena and Narcissa and Lily have to behave during the day (with the first two being at work, so it doesn't matter) but it doesn't matter at night cuz the kids go home to their own beds.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dinner, Deliberations, & Discovery" from ptbptb
Yeah, I've got to say that Harry is a right cold calculating bastard in this chapter.

Heaven forbid that he have _two_ mudblood friends, people might get the wrong idea about him.
Comments from author:
But as he points out, the political climate and the beliefs being passed on to certain children means that he's already going to end up having to defend Hermione from the world she's walking into (or so he thinks; turns out she doesn't really need that help but he doesn't know it at the time). He's trying to take advantage of what he learned the first time around to make his life better, so which would make his life easier and more pleasant: having to defend not only Hermione but another muggleborn friend from people like Malfoy and his ilk (not to mention even the passive condescension of people like the Weasleys and a number of other 'light' wizards) or a fellow half-blood or pureblood who could actually help split the load of watching out for Hermione and guiding her through her transition?
Review By [ptbptb] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Letomo
I've also ripped through it in one day, very enjoyable! I did think of an explanation Harry could give, just before falling asleep - he's learning all his advanced things from his dreams! He comes across as a true oneiromancer, and that is what gives him the edge; he is learning things while awake and asleep.

Otherwise, I hope you continue it, it is enjoyable and fun!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Ernestt
Wow, i just spent the last good 18 hours or so ripping my way through the story. I love how outrageous this new version of the Harry potter universe you have created is. getting to see how potter plots his way through his new life is great and the little sneak peaks into his future is really hilarious. seeing how his master plan unfolds is really exciting. the only thing i find somewhat disconcerting is how the Angels are all so adult like. it's kidda freaky but if i keep trying to forget that they are in fact 11 and 12, it totally fits. so anyway, i love your work so will i be expecting an entire series with 7 stories in the future? cuz omg if you do, i would be going through life waiting for a new chapter to come out and probably nothing else.

New Big Fan, Ernestt
Review By [Ernestt] • Date [4 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Elleria
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Meneldur
Good chapter. Much added complications now, especially if Albus was there the whole time and heard what Harry said about him, but the main ones will probably come from Albus seeing Harry's awesome power, and Hermione demanding to know what's going on with Harry. And still the question remains: What use is Tracey, and more obviously, Daphne? Tracey may be useful as a Ravenclaw, and another smart girl, but Daphne - as I noted in the last review, her only use seems to be as a kinda Ginny-type figure - she doesn't have a crush, but she wants to marry him. At the same time, she's weaker than all the other girls with Harry, and apparently won't even have as much as a bust as them - so what's she in for?
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from juansiete
good chapter, keep writing
Review By [juansiete] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Gideon
So Harry's dream comes mostly true and he kicks Volde butt most handily but he now has two sets of explanations waiting. I wonder if he can get Dumbledore to swear an unbreakable vow? And I bet Cherise will not be happy when he catches up with her.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quirrellmort" from Angelfirenze
Wow, I honestly can't think of anything to say here. You've left me blown away.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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