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Review of chapter "Unpast Tense" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
That was fast! Really wondering why Anya was sent to find her - looking forward to more.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unpast Tense" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
This story still seems to be incomplete. There are too many strands of the plot that are still open. Why is Anya here? Who erased Buffy's memory? What is the question Anya will find?
Comments from author:
The series is not complete yet.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unpast Tense" from AllenPitt
Review:
Hm. On reflection, maybe Anya isn't the best person to talk up the wonderfulness of Buffy's home dimension. Didn't even play the trump card about a minor sister that she's the guardian of, who needs her (playing a small violin while relating this helps)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unpast Tense" from (Recent Donor)betascud
Review:
Hmmm, strange. But then, Anya is kind of strange... I guess if she gave the whole story then it would be possible for mr mystical to determine that this is the 'heaven' that Buffy was pulled out of... or to check that there is another Buffy still alive in the home-dimension.
Comments from author:
A valkyrie's purpose is to bring slain valorous warriors to valhalla where they fight all day and prepare for ragnorok. I think Buffy counts as a slain valorous warrior.
Review By [(Recent Donor)betascud] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unpast Tense" from Mediancat
Review:
-- rather abrupt ending, there. Any plans for continuation?

Rob
Comments from author:
There will be more Anya and Enigma of course. It's just that this section cried out for completion and who was I to deny it?
Review By [Mediancat] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enigma, No More! (Or maybe still more. It depends)" from cmdruhura
Review:
Jen may just tie him into a Gordian Knot if he sent her away as it would make the pain last longer.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enigma, No More! (Or maybe still more. It depends)" from AllenPitt
Review:
Surely Sif will allow one of her Valkyries a few decades of R&R? It is Xander she's talking about, after all! Hm, maybe Anya isn't the best for a pep talk on why Buffy should go back to her home dimension. It'd have been a bit harder to turn down if Xander had been the one doing the talking. Or Giles, or Dawn. Or the mailman.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enigma, No More! (Or maybe still more. It depends)" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Another hilarious chapter! Gotta love it.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enigma, No More! (Or maybe still more. It depends)" from Sahugani
Review:
I really love the Enigma series. Hope you keep it going :)

I am left wondering with the whole dimensional travel with incongruent time flow thing.... if the resurrection has happened yet for Enigma.. I know you hinted in the last story that she got sent back to Marvel, but would they have wiped her memories again or is she simply repressing? I think maybe I think to much.... :P
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enigma, No More! (Or maybe still more. It depends)" from borgrabbit
Review:
Sittin' in the middle of a haiku:

Long tall green girlfriend
Paper bag with a bottle
Candles in the rain

☺☻♥♦♣♠•◘○◙♂♀♪♫☼☼↕►-◄↕→_←

I believe her memories would encourage her to appreciate Jennifer even more. Plus, what of the loved ones left behind? Dawn WAS her sister-daughter. Maybe a portal for familial visits?
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enigma, No More! (Or maybe still more. It depends)" from Gideon
Review:
Nice Summary Anya! One not guaranteed to make Buffy feel good, no matter how much she remembers :( Probably a good thing though as she should not be trying to go back - she has a good thing going where she is! It might be nice for Anya if Xander can come visit/ be reincarnated as an Asgard. If he dies in battle he at least has a chance right? Unless Odin thinks he is trying to steal his shtick, what with the eyepatch and all.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enigma, No More! (Or maybe still more. It depends)" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Poor Enigma, hearing Buffy's life and being asked/told that she should resume it. I think I'd tell Anya to stick it.
Comments from author:
Writing Anya's dialogue is soooo tough. Anya, as usual, thinks she knows what's going on whether she actually does or not.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who?" from borgrabbit
Review:
Anya's haiku:

Hunting her lonely one
Wind blew away memories
Restore the lost one

‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼

Great story!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who?" from Gideon
Review:
I guess Anya does have all the answers for once - makes a change from all the questions she used to ask Xander about being human! I'm surprised she hasn't asked for some financial compensation for all her answers though. But maybe being able to treat Buffy like a mental defective is its own compensation :)
maybe Xander and Willow could be reincarnated as the Richard's kids? And Buffy could be their cool Aunt, spoiling them with candy and late bedtimes...
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who?" from AllenPitt
Review:
It is funny that Anya of all people would be the one to fill Buffy in on her past. Doc Strange excited? Maybe the info from Anya will give him enough clues to find her home dimension? Poor Willow, make one or two dozen magic mistakes and everybody just assumes the worst of you. Heh.
But Dawn at least should be told Buffy is ok...sort of. And hey, Anya and Xander definitely should meet again.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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