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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Eureka
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Oh My! Having just read BOTH stories in the past 12 hours, I must say that I do so hope that you don't take months to give the next chapter to us.

I thought I had read this story before, but the one I read was where Buff was Already through all this and had moved her and Dawnie to Japan (I think it was) and her and Ichigo and the rest were fighting to get into the Serietei (Sorry for spelling) That isn't part of your series so I have no idea who wrote it.
Still I really like your story and Hope you keep up with it. I have it on tracking.
Comments from author:
That's jez's story, "Learning to Live". Not mine, but amazing all the same. Lightning_Skies also has a really good Bleach crossover, centering around Xander.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Shadohime
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Oi, vey. I'm beginning to regret not seeing Season Six before diving into this one. Ah, well. At least Buffy is still able to kick ass and take names.

You DO eventually plan to give Buffy her powers back, right? I mean, maybe not in the next few chapters, but sometime, right?

Also, are you going to introduce Faith to the pair of 11th divison men? Because I get the feeling they'd get along swimmingly...either that, or she'd end up killing Ikkaku.

Great chapter, and I'm looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Yes, she's definitely getting her powers back. The sequel to this wouldn't go so well if she didn't. Faith will be making an appearance... eventually. Still have to cover events of Season 7.

Soon (next five chapters-ish) there are going to be more Shinigami making their appearances.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from justapiranha
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Glad to see an update. I just realized i have tracking on most of your stories, so looking forward to updates on any of them. he heh eheh he..
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from AllenPitt
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is Riley married to what's her name yet? I suppose Buffy is so cold towards him because for her it's been decades? In the show she was all upset about him being married... Anyway-- one wonders if he'll still do the "oops I forgot to tell you not to kill it" thing. That was pretty lame.
At least B. let them loan her some money --- and boy should she have asked Travers for a salary in "Checkpoint" or what?
Comments from author:
Yep, Sam's in the picture. Going to make an appearance next chapter, most like.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Valkyrie
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Coolness!
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from war
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Glad someone mentioned Willow and Tara could help with the upkeep and payments.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
I always thought it odd that they didn't offer and Buffy didn't ask.
Review By [war] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from exqurere
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Fantastic story. Never would have thought of Ikkadu as a romantic interest but it really works, he's so likeable in that annoying want to smack him on the head way. Also the sibling relationship between Buffy and Yumichika is great. Looking forward to the next chapter
Review By [exqurere] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from AllenPitt
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I like the tension between Buffy's 2 sets of friends. Realistic. Hm...some of them could kinda/sorta see the spirit forms, indicating lots of soul strength? If Tara dies, does she end up in Soul Society also? That'd get sticky--imagine it happening as per schedule, Willow freaks out, and heads for Soul Society to try to retrieve Tara...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Shadohime
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YAY! AN UPDATE!

So, Buffy's back to normal, and the Trio have made their first appearance in the fic. So, it's only a matter of time before Tara gets killed, and Willow goes berserk. Minor plot suggestion: When Willow goes nuts, have her blow Buffy out of her body, back into full Shinigami mode. I've always wanted to see a battle between a pissed-off Wicca and a Slayer Shinigami.

Anyway, great update, and I hope your muse is back to normal, for regular updates!
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [23 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from CelebwenTelcontar
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So what will happen next with the Geek Squad? This was well done, by the way. Please continue. Will Buffy still be hit by the demon that makes her think she's really in an LA insane assylum?

CT
Review By [CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [23 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from war
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nice to see the family is getting closer. Considering Warren was just about to kill her Buffy really shouldn't let them off so easy.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Ikkaku's going to give her hell next chapter. Sparks will fly.
Review By [war] • Date [23 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from MistofRainbows
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Awww, I was really hoping that one of the soul guys would kill Warren. More the pity really.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [23 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from CelebwenTelcontar
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This is the invisibility episode, right? I'm glad you don't bring Spike into this much, can't stand him.

CT
Comments from author:
Yeah... There's definitely no Spuffy in this fic. As for the episode, yep it's the invisibility one. Next chapter is being worked on, not sure when it'll be posted.
Review By [CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Good chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [27 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Shadohime
Review:
Not having seen Season Six, this will be educational for me anyway. So did the Trio get an invisibility gun at some point?

And I REALLY want to introduce Ikkaku to my own Zanpakuto. Honestly, he has no idea of what the word 'tact' means, does he?

Looking forward to more, both on this and FIJYB! And I can't wait until you introduce Ichigo and company.
Comments from author:
Yeah, they built one. There's a whole episode, called 'Gone' that revolves around Buffy's invisibility. I'm going to have to rewatch it to get a better idea of what scenes I'm going to use.

Ikkaku is the kind of person who thinks the truth should be shared, even if the truth hurts. Yeah, he could use a lesson in tact, but if he tiptoed around stuff he wouldn't be Ikkaku.

Unfortunately, you're going to have to wait a while for Ichigo and company - that's not going to happen until book 3. As for 'Family', I wish I could promise a chapter in the next week or so, but with my schedule as it is right now I doubt it's going to happen.

Thanks for the comments :). You're one of the reviewers I look forward to when I post new stuff :)
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [26 May 11] • Not Rated
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