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Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
This is a pretty interesting premise- I like the argument that it was too much order that led to all the crap that tore up the Marvel universe. You really can't say that if Tony Stark hadn't been in charge of so much that the Skrull invasion and subsequent Norman Osborn takeover would have been so successful. The introduction of so many powerful DC heroes will certainly shake things up; SHIELD and the FOH types will both crap themselves when they get a hold of the Kryptonian and Wonder Woman stats. Off hand I can't think of many Marvel heroes that could go toe to toe with a fully powered Superman- Hulk and Thor are the only two that come to mind. I do admit that I'm disappointed that there wasn't a Green Lantern in the mix but oh well. Oh, and the Initiative boys better get out of Dodge quickly because Maggie Walsh will strap them down so fast... looking forward to the next chapter
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. If Nick Fury had been in charge, there would have been far less fallout from the Skrull Invasion. There is a Green Lantern that will be revealed in the next chapter and I will say one thing about him. He is a Big Gunn.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from ScorpioP
Review:
Hmm... the Justice League as agents of Chaos?? I suppose, if one considers the old D&D alignment of Chaotic Good. I can't see Ethan being that goody-goody though.

The matchups don't work that well for me, but I want to see where you take this. My own suggestions. admittedly from comics as well as the cartoon:

Buffy: Wonder Woman or Power Girl
-Diana is, of course, the pre-eminent woman in DC, the veritable representation of the gods; PG represents a more adult representation of the female Kryptonian than Supergirl
Xander: Nightwing or Captain Marvel Jr.
-Both are highly skilled warriors who never quite get the attention of their predecessors
Willow: Raven, Starfire, or Mary Marvel
-Powerful women with interesting storylines and a potential for the darkside
Cordelia: Catwoman or Black Canary
-Hotness without major power-ups; 'nuff said.
Giles: Dr. Fate or Martian Manhunter, possibly original (Earth-2) Green Lantern
-Removed from the realm of ordinary people, with mystic or quasi-mystic powers, also the voice of experience
Dawn: Supergirl or Stargirl
-the young, eager hero with a boatload of power
Oz: Citizen Steel or Wildcat
-CS is a very reluctant hero, and I can't resist the humor of a werewolf with a cat motif!
Faith: Huntress, possibly Vixen
-serious bad attitude with both
Jenny: Batgirl, later Oracle
-Jenny in spandex, plus her computer skills as Oracle

Angel/us: Batman/Owlman or Spectre
--Angel does the Dark Knight so well, but being the Spectre would allow for some serious wrath-bringing
Spike: Joker or Deadman
--Frankly, a vampire Joker scares me, but I can't see Spike as Luthor or Sinestro, and none of the other villains I can think of are big enough. The Deadman's sense of humor would work for Spike as an anti-hero
Drusilla: Poison Ivy
--Crazy, seductive, deadly
Harmony: Harlequin
--Daffy, not a major threat
Willy: Penguin or Riddler
--Two villains who could work as information brokers
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it but I'd like to respond to your suggestions.

Buffy already has super strength and super speed when compared to a normal human anyway. Turning her into Wonder Woman or Power Girl wouldn't have caused her any problems as she already is a metahuman. Give her a completely different power than what she's use to and she has to learn to control it.

Xander as Nightwing or Captain Marvel Jr wouldn't have worked for me either. While Nightwing would have been good based on his personality, I needed to have Xander be Superman. I didn't want to use heroes who are pale reflections of the previous one. I don't see Nightwing in that category but Captain Marvel Jr is.

Willow: Raven wouldn't have been a good idea as I'm trying to not have her be uber-magic girl. Starfire would have been a good choice but I didn't want to make a Teen Titans fic. Mary Marvel is also a powerful person magically and I didn't want that because it would have been too typical for her.

Cordelia: What's wrong with her being Wonder Woman? It fits better with her as a Princess than her as a former thief. Black Canary wouldn't have been good either because I can't see Cordelia like her.

Giles: Why'd you suggest Doctor Fate when I already have him as the good doctor?

Dawn: Already have her as Supergirl

Oz: Never liked Citizen Steel and isn't Wildcat in his sixties or seventies?

Faith: Wasn't in Sunnydale at the time.

Jenny: Good choice but you can't disagree that she wouldn't look good dressed as Zatanna plus it gives her a mystical power up.

Angel: Already have him as Batman. Owlman is evil. If I made him the Spectre, he'd be dead as would the Illuminati.

Spike: I agree that a vampire Joker scares anyone but it would be bad to see Luthor or Sinestro. I didn't want to kill him to make him Deadman either.

Drusilla: Poison Ivy isn't crazy per say

Harmony: Not a bad choice but I was trying to pick heroes.

Willy: Fat Willy?
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from darthridian
Review:
excellent start, looking forward to more.

can't wait to see what they will do when they find out about the watchtower. :)
Comments from author:
I'm planning on a few surprises to be found on the Watchtower.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
Review:
This is great. Great choices for people to hero match ups. Although I would have one sent to Faith as well.

As for the Hulk in LA fight, poor bruiser is gonna get hammered by Xander, Willow and Cordellia.

I do have one suggestion. Please, please, please have Spidey leave the Avengers to join the Justice League. If there is any Marvel Hero who is up to the shining example of goodness that Superman and Wonder Woman are it is Spidey. I would say Captain America would be a good choice too, but if he left the Avengers they would crumble.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed my matchups though I couldn't really see sending Faith a costume because of two reasons. 1) She was living in Boston at the time. Information would have been a little difficult for Ethan to find. 2) If I had sent her a costume, I would have had to send one to Kendra and I don't see Sam Zabato letting her wear a Halloween costume.

Feel pity for the Hulk as many others will be joining the fight such as Dawn/Supergirl, Joyce/Powergirl, Oz/Martian Manhunter, and Riley/Captain Atom to name a few.

I am considering Spidey joining the League but he isn't the only one I'm looking at. I'm giving serious thoughts about a few of the Thunderbolts.
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from Chikageko
Review:
Pretty cat girl insult hulk? HULK SMASH! rofl.
Absolutely hilarious story. Gotta say though it's written as if you expected there to be comic pannels there to support the work and forgot to add them in.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not nocking your story; it's, as usual, better than almost half of the work on this site, it's just there are things i don't agree with. Willow for instance Her charactor is all about two things, being the inteligent one (though not always the smart one...) and magic later on. Hawk girl is inteligent true, but she's only avarage and is all about smashing magic users with her mace. Dawns coustume choice as well. The personality fits her I'll admit and the powers will be useful for when glory finally hunts her down but it've been a lot more... poetic to have her as Raven from the teen titans. They're both massive energy wells made either for or by creatures of "indescribable evil" (snort), skilled in sorcery and who's purpose is to open a portal for said entity.

just my opinions; hope you continue, would love to hear your responce.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I will get to what you don't agree with right away. Too many times I have seen Willow become uber-magic girl because of Halloween or later on. I didn't want to go that route as it is too typical of what you see. Willow wielding a weapon that disrupts magic is the complete opposite of what you normally see and that is why I went that route. Dawn's costume choice was appropriate in my opinion as she is an emotional person. I didn't want to use Raven as Raven choses to supress her emotions. It would have been bad for Dawn's character to do that to her.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from Rob
Review:
Quite a little mix up you have going here. :)
Comments from author:
I try. I hope you continue to read and review.
Review By [Rob] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from BlueEyedJedi
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I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Superman Vs. the Hulk: Who will win? This adage was once said in response to the question'Who is the toughest comic character?' IN ANY FIGHT, MY MONEY IS ON SUPERMAN. NUFF SAID.

Peace
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sorry about not responding earlier to the review.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from Omegaprime
Review:
Interesting story, mixing up those 3 universes will be kinda explosive.

I think that message S.E.T.I. got was probably from Galactus. Interesting reactions from the people who keep an eye out for any oddities in thier universe.

Hehe, poor Deadpool, even him knowing about the 4th wall never prepaired him for this.

Well I'm kinda interested to see how this will work out.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I thought it would be explosive as well.

The message S.E.T.I got could have came from anybody. I mean the number of alien races and other beings out there is enormous. Galactus, Thanos, the Skrulls, the Shi'ar, and other races could have felt what happened and some may choose to investigate.

I actually got the idea for Deadpool appearing in this chapter from TAO who kinda shoved me in this direction after I told him one of the crazy plot bunnies that had popped up in my head.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from djhardim
Review:
Good beginning. I wonder how "Middle Management" will react to this.

Another possibility for a crossover - "The Justice Friends".

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Justice_Friends#The_Justice_Friends

I can see Oz as Val Hallen.

How would the Marvel superheroes react to a group that was a parody of them?
Comments from author:
"Middle Management" will be told where to stick it. I've been considering a 'minor' confrontation with the Watcher's council though.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from IAMZIPPY
Review:
When can i have more?!!!!
Comments from author:
There is more already up. I hope you enjoy it.
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from darkcarnage
Review:
Good start. This looks like it could be a great read. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how the Hulk against Superman fight goes in this story.
Comments from author:
Well, I hope you read since your review.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from tactless
Review:
This looks like in could be a lot of fun.

I'm pretty sure this won't happen, but...

...Apocalypse vs. Doomsday...

...I'm just sayin'
Comments from author:
Well, there is a Phantom Zone projector on the Watchtower...


...I'm just sayin'
Review By [tactless] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from Dhampyr
Review:
Angel as Batman and Spike as Green Arrow pains me deeply, but I love the concept as a whole. The fact Giles could go toe to toe with Dr Strange now will be interesting. I wonder how the Vishanti will take Nabu having a link to one of their worlds? The fact that the Watchtower popped up too is a new spin. The neo-Justice League will actually have the resources to take care of themselves from the get go. I look forward to the next part.
Comments from author:
Angel as Batman was too obvious but Spike as Green Arrow was thrown in as something you wouldn't expect as were several of the costume choices that I had made. Some people have commented why I chose Willow as the Hawkgirl of this fic rather than another DC magic user. The reason for this is simple as it wasn't what you expected and didn't stereotype Willow in the uber-magic user category. The Vishanti will react just about the same as everyone else will. They won't know what's going on. Having the Watchtower pop up was needed as I needed the new Justice League to be able to compete on the same level if not more so with the Avengers now rather than a year from now in the story.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome... someone became the incarnation of Nature's rage
Comments from author:
Remember, this is set in a cross of Earth-616 and Buffyverse with the DCAU thrown in as costumes. No one from Sunnydale became anyone from the Marvel universe.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League Of Their Own" from Jearom
Review:
Oh I love it! Marvel was my first love, but I have become a huge DC fan over the last few years. I can't wait to see the clash between the much darker, greyish Marvel heroes and the bright shining example of the DC Justice League!
Comments from author:
But remember this, these aren't exactly the DC heroes. They're several residents of Sunnydale turned into them. I'm glad you love it though. I'm working on chapter 2 right now.
Review By [Jearom] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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