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Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from AzrielSunHawk
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*ROTFL* love that they are half siblings. that's really cool.
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from Coldhands
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Oh. My. GOD!

You answered my challenge. Someone actually answered this challenge!

AND you're writing your own story of it so well! I now join the swarm of other reviewers in saying the reactions are just spot on, and this chapter gave me a warm giggly feeling all through it. I wait with bated breath for what comes next.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from calikocat
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That. Was. So. COOL! I giggled off and on through the entire chapter. I absolutely loved Xander limiting the amount of books Giles could take. And Giles' realization of the inherited babble. *snerk* Definitely tracking and can't wait to see what you do with this. lol
Review By [calikocat] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
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I love the idea, but I'm still confused about Dawn's light. I get why it would show her as a full sibling, seeing as she was made from Buffy, but nobody seemed surprised about it in hindsight. I mean, did Joyce fool around with Jack more than once? Because nobody knows about Dawn being different yet, so Hank should be her father as far as they all know.

They should have expected that her light would be red, once they knew that Hank wasn't Buffy's dad.
Comments from author:
Gah! End Season 4, they don't know about her being the Key yet. Hmm... How to retcon ;)

Thanks for pointing that out, anyway. Oh, and it would have been light red, like faded red, not pink. 'Cause only half of the parentage is supplied by Joyce.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from djhardim
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Jack could have made a donation to a sperm bank.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from AllenPitt
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Darn, it's too soon for the Jack clone to be around. But maybe later on instead Loki can clone up all the scoobies. We could see Ripper as a young teen...
Jack has a lot of 'splainin' to do, for sure. So.... he was with Joyce, AND the current Mrs. Rosenberg AND the current Mrs. Harris?
I don't suppose Spike had any kids before he died?He could be everybody's great-great-great....
*** The Rosenbergs and their constant travel for "conventions" are obviously top secret agents working for the CIA. Maybe an Alias crossover? Mrs. R is also one of Sydney's aunts? The possibilities...
Comments from author:
he he... This is good. I do have something planned for Willow's mum, but - shh - it's a secret. I also have thought about Giles. But they're not written yet, so... Pity I know so little about Alias.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from Capricorn
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Oh, this sounds so promising. I really hope you keep going with this because the reactions are so spot on for the Scoobies. And Joyce's reasoning for getting out of it is vastly entertaining.

Have to wonder though, how would O'Neill and the rest react to the little orb of light hitting them? Would he have been knocked out as well?
Comments from author:
If I discuss Jack's end of the spell, it would be fairly mild. After all, it travelled 1400 miles (apparently, according to the map site I found) to get to him, and a matter of a couple of feet, if that, for Willow and Xander.
Review By [Capricorn] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from Rosetta
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More, please?
Review By [Rosetta] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from Blackett
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more please!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from (Past Donor)solunvar
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That's... pretty amusing so far. Though the soap factor could always be turned up a notch of course. (Evil double and stuff like that.) Are you going to continue this? (It should.)
Comments from author:
I have seven chapters planned all up. Hadn't thought about evil twins, or anything like that. Hmm...

Anyway, another chapter tomorrow night, my time.
Review By [(Past Donor)solunvar] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from SpacedCadet
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FUN!

More please.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from jbjewel
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I can't decide what I want to see more. The Scooby road trip or SGC trying to figure out what the hell the light that slammed into Jack O'Neil was. I can just see Carter. Oh, the Asgard are going to be consumed with curiosity about the "O'Neil" children. I can also picture Xander and Willow reacting to aliens and poor Giles finding out that the mighty god Thor is a Roswell grey. Is mini-Me around yet? Does the ATA gene have anything to do with magic? CAN Xander do magic? I can't wait to see the rest of this.
Comments from author:
Okay, I can say that mini-me is Season 7 (darn!) as well at the ATA thing, from what I can see. Although, they have come across Ancient language and technology, as well as met the Asgard. But just because canon doesn't know about the gene doesn't mean it isn't already in play.

I'm going with 'he was sleeping when it happened' for the blue light thing. Or not. Haven't explored it yet in what I've written.
Review By [jbjewel] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from troy
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Like the beginning of this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [troy] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from hpssslashfan
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LOL! I luv Xander's reactions to having siblings.
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh, Ew! Ick!" from Waverly
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This is hilarious XD I loved the squick when the Scoobies realized they had had crushes on their siblings.
So is Tara going with them or is it Dawn? It would make more sense for it to be Dawn since O'Neill is her father and/or grandfather, or does she not know?
Comments from author:
Dawn is staying home with Joyce (she's, I think 14 at the time) and Willow wants her girlfriend with her. (Pity Buffy, who's sharing a room.)
Review By [Waverly] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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