Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Leaving Sunnydale" from RevDorothyL
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Well done (on your part, with the writing, and on Speed's part, in dealing with Xander and Willow in a responsible, loving, trustworthy adult way -- something neither of them has had much experience of, previously!).
Comments from author:
I love Speed - even though he sometimes strikes me as not that responsible in his personal life. Having to worry about a sibling should help with that.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Leaving Sunnydale" from kayron
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I thought that it was wonderful when Tim said that he would want Xander even if he were a juvenile delinquent. That level of acceptance was certainly more than Xander had ever received from the people who were supposed to have been his parents for so many years.
Comments from author:
I've been watching the latter seasons of CSI: Miami, and am kinda basing Speed's reactions on how Horatio felt when he found out about Kyle. It would be great if they became best friends as well as brothers.
Review By [kayron] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Leaving Sunnydale" from Neverwillmini
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Because we know what is eventually coming to Sunnydale, I kind of want Speed to find out Willow's pretty much an abandoned child, and possibly that Jesse's parents more than resemble the Harris'. He's moving to a bigger place; if he finds a 3 or 4 bedroom, maybe while Xander is recovering from treatment, he'll decide to take them in too?
Comments from author:
LOL. Speed's Home for Sunnydale's Abused and Neglected Children.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Leaving Sunnydale" from Kirallie
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Go Speed!!
Comments from author:
Isn't he great?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
LOVE it! I was just hit with a CSI:Miami bug and started searching for crossover fics. Imagine my great joy at finding that you were writing one. Love the way you wrote Willow! Can't wait to reaad more. :D
Comments from author:
Eeee! You just gave me my 4500th review! Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Just for that, I think I'll try to write an update for this fic before getting back to Daddy Gibbs.
Review By [spk] • Date [4 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Reunited" from Kirallie
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Great work!!! Sad that Xander's sick
Comments from author:
Thanks. Needed something big to get Speed's attention all the way in FL.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Reunited" from Genuka
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*snicker* Hyper willow. *snicker* Now that's just .... Poor Speed. Did you have to inflict Hyper Willow on him? At least it wasn't Darth Willow. Or worse yet Darth Hyper Willow!
More please!
Comments from author:
This is only babbly Willow; she didn't actually have any caffeine this time. Maybe next time Speed can see how it affects her.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Reunited" from AllenPitt
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huh. ok, so he goes to Florida with big brother then maybe 1 year+ later, starts getting weird emails from Willow about this new friend she's made called "Buffy"...? Eventually gets concerned and shows up for a visit? For the different scooby gang I'm voting: Willow (of course) and maybe Jonathan or Amy.
Comments from author:
Definite possibilities there.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from twlight
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I love this story so far and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's certainly different for me to try a Xander-centered fic.
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Aw! Speed's so happy to find Xander. How cute! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
It's like trying to write an emotional Oz. Some people you just have to say it's OOC and deal with it.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from AriaDragoncrest
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from RevDorothyL
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What a good big brother!
Comments from author:
Would have been nice for Xander to have him growing up, but then again, he wouldn't be Xander anymore, would he?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from AXanFan
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I have only watched a few episodes of CSI: Miami, but it seems to be a more and more popular x-over in Fic so I have become acquainted with the characters, at least how they tend to be portrayed in Fanfiction.
I have always liked the idea of Xander having a different family and I think it could be really interesting to have him related to Speed. I look forward to how he will be accepted into the Miami dynamic, but I hate to see him lose touch with the Sunnydale crew -- their interaction is what makes Xander who he is at his core.
I like that Xander is still so young -- he has a chance to salvage some of his childhood. Please write more soon
Comments from author:
I just got the first 8 seasons on DVD (early Christmas prezzie to myself) and am into season 3 of watching them all. Since Speed was only really in the first two, I just have to decide where to put Xander into that timeline.
Don't worry, he'll stay in touch with his buds. I picked this age because it was pre-series for BtVS, but Xander was old enough that he was the Xander Buffy *would* have met, just a year younger.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from LNR
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Wasn't this already posted? I have hoping for another chapter.
Comments from author:
That's why it says re-post in the summary. When the beta(s) get the next chapter back to me, I can start to think about chapter 4.
Review By [LNR] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from Genuka
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Truly evil. MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
So you like evil? Is that what you're trying to tell me?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]