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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from yuiop
Review:
Nice!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from zeebstripes
Review:
I'm glad you updated! i hope you don't get too caught up with life again before the next update :) i know i can't wait for the next chapter already. It'd be fun to see Ginny and Buffy get into a fight over Harry, not a physical one but a verbal one!
Review By [zeebstripes] • Date [25 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from kegan
Review:
This looks really interesting, got me totally excited! I can't wait for Buffy to meet Harry's old friends, looking forward to their reaction to her. Update soon! :)
Review By [kegan] • Date [24 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from zeebstripes
Review:
i hope you update soon cant wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Life's been really busy, but I'm working on the new chapter and it should be up within a few days. Thanks for sticking with the story :D
Review By [zeebstripes] • Date [16 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
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liked this chapter :)
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from zeebstripes
Review:
this is a great story, i hope you update it soon! can't wait to read more
Review By [zeebstripes] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Innogen
Review:
I really like this concept. You introduced Buffy's World with subtlety (How Sneaky!): I admire this. Your technique economically and ergonomically (uh, naturally - I'm feeling way wordy) maps out the main obstacles for your story.

I am looking forward to the next chapters: figuring out the prophecy, the meeting at the ministry, and the results of Molly's plotting, and resolving Ginny's stagnant heart. I sense that while she 'likes' her current boyfriend, he doesn't really stir her soul. She needs passion and devotion, as well as someone with integrety...maybe Xander? (He is a Wizard, after all, because all he has to do is speak 'Latin to the books' to get them to catch fire - plus, he has a thing for red-heads ::grin::)

Regarding Molly's Plotting: I wonder how Ron and Hermione will react to Buffy? In other stories, Ron is often suspicious and Hermione is worshipful due to meeting a myth. Or, perhaps they want nothing to do with her and feel that Harry is theirs and theirs alone. I hope you find a way to go against stereo-type: wouldn't it be a hoot if Hermione never HEARD or READ about 'The Slayer', and her existence is something closely guarded by the Unspeakables of the various Wizarding Governments? Wouldn't it be amusing if Ron DID simply because he over-heard Percy speaking to Arthur about something some trivia he picked up sitting outside Fudge's office, even if Fudge, or the person he was discussing the topic with, didn't believe in the subject? Maybe the two will simply be grateful that Harry found his way to Buffy, rather than to a solitary grave as so many feared? Perhaps it's that simple.

Any way you write it, I'm looking forward to reading it!

May your Muse inspire you and keep you safe from Carpal Tunnel! Please forgive my typos!

~Innogen
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review. It helps to know what people are thinking about the story. I hope to answer a lot of those questions in the coming chapters, and I might steal an idea or two that you mentioned ;)

I hope you keep reading it, thanks again!
Review By [Innogen] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spk
Review:
Definitely an interesting start. I LOVE Buffy/Harry pairings. Can't wait to see where this goes. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zeebstripes
Review:
i hope you update soon! this is a great story and can't see where you take it!
Review By [zeebstripes] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from robertlisle
Review:
This is a great start to a story. I can't wait to see where you go with it.
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
Review:
awesome!! more pleeze!
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackett
Review:
sad but somehow believable. I think is promising. I remember reading the books and although he wins is this feeling you get from so many deaths especially of the people/beings you cared about so...totally believable i think. I hope there will be more.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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