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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Witch Way is Up?" from Rob
Review:
Creepy but fun.
Review By [Rob] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from lillyb
Review:
Just to be clear I have no problems with revenge, vengeance when done properly can be poetry, I just have a issue with a Jessy jacket. The pelt of a deceased friend should not be used for clothing, thus my lamp shade comment On second thought Jessy would likely prefer to be a seat cushion in the girls locker room or something like that. Other than that as I said "brilliant"
Review By [lillyb] • Date [13 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from Genericrandom
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Wow, that was awesome, I just threw up in my mouth a little bit. Vampire Leather though... they could start a trend.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from jhor
Review:
definitely macabre. I like it please continue!
Review By [jhor] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from lillyb
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Brilliant, but a jacket... a Jessy jacket? yuck! now a lamp shade maybe... but a jacket? icky!
Comments from author:
You really wouldn't want to torture and punish the demon inhabiting the body of your friend? These guys aren't always about it, but they enjoy destruction and pain.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from Michaelsuave
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Interesting in that fun and creepy way. I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of it. Definitely gets a 10 for originality. Cheers!
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from AnFan
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This is truly bizarre and unusual :) I like it. I hope you may give us some response to some of the stories that the pair send to the Crypt Keeper. I would imagine that the story of the robot dating buffy's mom would be interesting. You would have to do something with the Zombie Mask though, not very exciting as a CK story. He would probably be very interested in hearing about the key... though you will have to put the right spin on that one.

I like where you've taken Xander and Willlow so far. What would be interesting is if you eventually had them learn the art of the bard to at least a little degree. It would probably come from him asking details and them seeing the stories show up on cable.

I hope to see more of this. I've enjoyed reading the first few chapters.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from stonewar
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jesus. they are seriously creepy.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from cwolf
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I think the Mayor might have an "interesting" experience
Review By [cwolf] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Great story, I have to restrain myself from rewriting each chapter to add a little more atmosphere.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from Ringmaster
Review:
Creepy. I like it!
Review By [Ringmaster] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from tealruby
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Very cool story; I didn't think it could work after a single chapter but you've turned it into a good tale. Hopefully lots more to follow?
Review By [tealruby] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from LFW
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Good read, this Giles is able to talk to Buffy easier.
I am curious as to why Buffy went with Willow and Xander, even if they are in the know and apparently against evil, I am just surprised that both Willow and Xander flirting with her did not make her more skittish.
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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An update! :-)

Thought this one was dead and buried. Glad to be proven wrong. Another new chapter soon?
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What, no fruit basket? (Welcome to the Hellmouth)" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Okay, I enjoyed this way more than I thought I would and I have to say that my first thought was, More Please! Great take on the Cryptkeeper, the nature of Bards, Xander and Willow under the influence of a benign(ish) naughty(ish) storyteller of questionable alignment, Buffy discovering the new hunters and enjoying the flirt, and just all around effect of changes in the story line. Nice. Nice. Nice.

Anyhow, I like the story, and it's on my track list. Please do keep adding to it. Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
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