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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Shouldn't forget elbows, they hurt like heck when they're broke. The first part (Angelus and Xander) of ch. 2 made me think about why Xander allowed Buffy to get away with allowing Cordy and Willow to get hurt in the final episodes of the second season. More logical would be -Buffy ran up in front of the Crawford Street mansion when her knee exploded, shortly after that Xander walked up with a Rocket Launcher under his arm and a pistol of some type in his fist. Looking at Buffy he simply said "I warned you of what would happen if Willow was hurt or killed because you never saw a trap you wouldn't spring. Now watch," as he then blows up the mansion before Angelus can activate Alcatha.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)Dakaath
Review:
I like the way Willow died, it was quite creative. As was Xander's idea for punishment. Though the fact the two were talking without violence was a bit strange.

Loved the kneecapping though. 40 kneecappings, think Spike would get the hint.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dakaath] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Orchamus
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Wow, that first bit was dark ass hell, but the second was a bit more fun. Still not as good as turning a concentration camp into a giant roman candle though.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Eureka
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THAT was just too funny! My question is though...WHO would get the broken kneecaps? Cause both need it at times.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Greywizard
Review:
Okay, the first half was definitely DISTURBING!!!! 0.0


And reading the second half had me LMAO!!!! ;-)

Thanks for sharing this.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LFW
Review:
The kneecaps is funny and the lack of soul is something that a young Xander might do . . . good piece if scary.
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RockyWilliams
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LOL I read the first half of chapter two and thought "Wow." Didn't think I could like the second half as much. But the second half made me laugh louder than any story in awhile.
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Fantastic and funny! Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dialNforNinja
Review:
This too is nifty, and gets the top rating possible for its length. I like Sandi's idea from an earlier review, about a Blade-like duo of Xander and Angelus meeting with Marvel Movieverse characters in New York.

- dNN
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Great story. One thought -

“How about, Mopy Dick; the Great White -- Whale -- r?” Xander suggested.

Under the circumstances, the Great White "Wailer" might be more appropriate.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Loatroll
Review:
Hail godogma!

Great stuff like always. The only believable take on this situation I've seen.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)jcon
Review:
What fun. Liked both Xander & Angelus. Lovely fantasy getting the Nazis' before they torture more.

So what happens to Xander & Willow?
Comments from author:
She drug him upstairs for sex.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
Oh. My. God...

When I saw the description, I was dubious: as you say, too many Xander/Angelus pairings by squeeing fangurls (or fanboyz) and those just *never* end well.

After reading your other stuff, I should have known better. ;)

"'What can I say? Genocidal racists piss me off,' Xander said with a mad grin, flames dancing in his eyes.

'I just want to remind you, I was an equal opportunity killer. I killed for the sake of it, not because I was better than anyone else due to an accident of birth.' "

*snicker!* When you even make the Scourge of Europe nervous... ;)

"'We came, we saw...' Xander began.

'We torched its ass,' Angelus misquoted, causing Xander to snicker."

Snerk! Thanks to you, I now love this teamup so much that I'm going to have to do one once I'm able to get back to writing.
Comments from author:
I see a white hat Angelus as the type of guy who refuses to whine or mope about anything, just for fear he'll turn out like Angel. I can easily see him as even more evil and viscous towards the black hats than the white hats are comfortable with, with the exception of Xander.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ghostwriter
Review:
Ha ha ha ha. Great stuff. Catch ya on the flip side.
Review By [Ghostwriter] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lillyb
Review:
read this before and loved it then, Just read it again... still loved it;)
Review By [lillyb] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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