Review of chapter "Big Girl Boots" from Caliadragon
Review:
I love how the kids turnd to Jon over everyone else. I always thought it cruel that they sepersted Jon from everything andeveryone he knew. I lookfoward to seeing where this goes next.
Thanks Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great chap, and great continuation, yay they want to stay with Jon at least Faith does, and he will at least be able to understand a bit about what their going through, although he is able to be more self sufficient, it will be interesting to see how this continues, please update soon.
Review By [thundever] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Man, it'd be so nice if something like that had actually happened so none of them would die or turn evil. Cute and funny, I can see Connor as a kid doing something like that to whatever bad/annoying person came along. Made me laugh out loud, nice work.
Comments from author:
It was just his random idea of CONNOR IN BOOTS! And I have a weakness for kid!fic so...yeah. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [marajaded] • Date [18 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
*laughing like a loon* Oh, I absolutely LOVE this! I never cared much for Connor in AtS due to his constant whininess and general bad attitude, but I can forgive a helluva lot for laying Anise out cold with one of Teal'c's boots! I also greatly enjoyed the look into Jon and Jack's heads. Great story all around, thanks for sharing it!
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. There is! I mentioned in the Author's Note that this is supposed to be a series of vignettes from Jon's PoV. 10, I'm thinking.
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Hilarious!!!!!! I can sooo see that happening. How it got set up in the first place on the other hand.... Haven't got a clue but the scene its self? Oh yeah!
*begs* Please continue this! *adds puppy dog eyes of doom for good measure*
Comments from author:
Thanks! There's a little set up in that Jon mentions Daniel (while ascended) dropped them off, mentioning that they need somewhere safe to stay. But mostly, I wanted to write this scene. I'm glad you like it!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
THanks! I mentioned in the Author's Notes that this would be a series of vignettes from Jon's PoV, around 10 I'm thinking. (Although I might change some things and just put them all in the same story? Because I don't want to start another series?)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Not Rated