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Review of chapter "Big Girl Boots" from VillageOrchid
Review:
But how does he know that Faith wants a "kick ass leather jacket". Anyhow some "cute" ideas here. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Big Girl Boots" from HebiR
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I wanna hug her too. And then, since no one will give her anything sharp or projectile, give her very small brass knuckles.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Big Girl Boots" from Caliadragon
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I love how the kids turnd to Jon over everyone else. I always thought it cruel that they sepersted Jon from everything andeveryone he knew. I lookfoward to seeing where this goes next.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Big Girl Boots" from war
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I have alot of pity for poor Jon.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Big Girl Boots" from thundever
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Great chap, and great continuation, yay they want to stay with Jon at least Faith does, and he will at least be able to understand a bit about what their going through, although he is able to be more self sufficient, it will be interesting to see how this continues, please update soon.
Review By [thundever] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from marajaded
Review:
Man, it'd be so nice if something like that had actually happened so none of them would die or turn evil. Cute and funny, I can see Connor as a kid doing something like that to whatever bad/annoying person came along. Made me laugh out loud, nice work.
Comments from author:
It was just his random idea of CONNOR IN BOOTS! And I have a weakness for kid!fic so...yeah. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [marajaded] • Date [18 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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*laughing like a loon* Oh, I absolutely LOVE this! I never cared much for Connor in AtS due to his constant whininess and general bad attitude, but I can forgive a helluva lot for laying Anise out cold with one of Teal'c's boots! I also greatly enjoyed the look into Jon and Jack's heads. Great story all around, thanks for sharing it!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from thundever
Review:
Great story, I hope you continue it soon and that Jon and Jack will get on a bit better.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [thundever] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Allyssiandra
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Oh Gawd! I could just picture this scene. Loved it! LMAO! More please.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from calikocat
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Ha! Cute! None of the kids like Anise. And Connor tromping around in Teal’c's boots is priceless.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. ;)~
Review By [calikocat] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from shinysolace
Review:
oh that was perfect- sad there's no more to come!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. There is! I mentioned in the Author's Note that this is supposed to be a series of vignettes from Jon's PoV. 10, I'm thinking.
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from spk
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Such a cute story! Loved Connor knocking out Anise. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! It just seemed like an appropriate reaction.
Review By [spk] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Genuka
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Hilarious!!!!!! I can sooo see that happening. How it got set up in the first place on the other hand.... Haven't got a clue but the scene its self? Oh yeah!

*begs* Please continue this! *adds puppy dog eyes of doom for good measure*
Comments from author:
Thanks! There's a little set up in that Jon mentions Daniel (while ascended) dropped them off, mentioning that they need somewhere safe to stay. But mostly, I wanted to write this scene. I'm glad you like it!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love it! Any chance of more of this someday?
Comments from author:
THanks! I mentioned in the Author's Notes that this would be a series of vignettes from Jon's PoV, around 10 I'm thinking. (Although I might change some things and just put them all in the same story? Because I don't want to start another series?)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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