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Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
AW! Chibi Connor is so CUTE!
Comments from author:
Yes he is! (Now I want to see an actual drawing of Chibi Connor, dang it.)
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from slmncpm
Review:
wow, i am wishing this was NOT a one shot. seriously, i love a kid who knocks out that stupid bitch. heh. yay!
Comments from author:
Oh, it's not. I mentioned in the Author's Notes that this would be a series of vignettes from Jon's PoV. So, there'll be more. Around 10, I'm thinking. Glad you liked it!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from PrincessTai
Review:
First off: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ~ although a bit belated.

Second off: SOOO CUTE! Just so adorable! Oh, I can just see baby Connor walking around in those shoes. There are no words to describe it but know that you have massive amounts of amusment from me. Just the image of him in shoes that should have been too heavy for him ... the looks of fondness that he already manged to get from Jon and Teal'c, just so very sweet :-D

I'm also sorry to hear about the muse :-( It happens! Hopefully things get back on track, until then I am going to busy myself by 'awwwing' all over this fic lol
Comments from author:
First: THANK YOU! It's never too late to share good wishes.

Second: RIGHT? TouchoftheWind kept going CONNOR IN TEAL'C's SHOES! PLEASE?! And, lo, fic was born. And it is adorableness.

It is not cooperating, which is why I've been churning out ficlets and drabbles, lately. THOSE cooperate long enough to get finished. AWW lots, because there should be more to come. (Hopefully, soon.)
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun and finally Connor makes a good move. Hoping you had a good birthday and thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks and it had to happen, eventually. It was a good birthday, thanks for the good wishes.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from peppermint
Review:
love what you have so far and hope that you run with it some more.

HOPE YOU HAD A SUPER BIRTHDAY!!!!
Comments from author:
I think this series of vignettes (like I mentioned in the Author's Notes) is going to be around 10 chapters. This, by no means, is the end.

It was a good birthday. :)
Review By [peppermint] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I love it. I'd like to see a full-lenth story based on this!
Comments from author:
Thanks. In the author's note, I mentioned that there were going to be vignettes from Jon's PoV. I'm thinking there are actually going to be 10. Hopefully that'll be enough for me to spin a full story.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Rhyssia
Review:
/cackles, snorts, then continues to cackle.

Go Connor!
Comments from author:
Our boy! He has such good aim! Hee!
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from RippersGirl
Review:
Hilarious!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RippersGirl] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Neverwillmini
Review:
I was happy to see more fic postings from you and was smiling while I read anyway, then I came across:

[picture tiny toddler Connor in outsized Jaffa armor boots] "Connor let loose a war cry and sharply kicked out on armor-covered foot, the heavy metal boot sliding right off, flying across the room, and smacking Anise in the face, knocking her out cold."

I just about fell off my chair laughing; I did snort my hot chocolate (ow). Great imagery!
Comments from author:
I've been working on more, I swear. It's just a line by line by paragraph kind of writing that's driving me crazy.

It's possibly my favorite part of the story, so I'm glad you liked it! (Sorry for the up the nose situation, though.)
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Gideon
Review:
Lovely. Now there are three generations! At least there is only one other jack to snark at, imagine three of them! Daniel chose well anyway - Jack will make a better parent than any of them had (at least after Joyce died)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yes, the chaos train continues to chug right along. :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Bwah-ha-ha-ha-ha....

Loved this.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from dragondawn
Review:
LOL!! Oh, Cute, cute, cute!! I love this one :o)
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. ;)~
Review By [dragondawn] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Greywizard
Review:
I've never really cared all that much about canon Connor before this, but his reaction to Anise has now put him in my 'I think I love this kid' class. ;-)
Comments from author:
I can find the funny in the wangstiest characters. *nods* It's a skill I'm proud of. And you know those instincts would've been there, even if he was wee!Connor.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is freaking hilarious! I love seeing Jon with the kids and it will be interesting to see how he responds to more of the aliens they run into. Knocking Anise out was inspired.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks! Jon! I couldn't help myself. I'm not sure how much more they'll interact with the SGC. But, you know, there's always the Trust...
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from kayron
Review:
No one at the SGC is fond of Anise, so knocking her out cold is a good way to make friends. Cute story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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