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Review of chapter "Small Steps" from Gideon
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Fantastic addition to the series. You have a great insight into all of the characters. I believe that Jonas would make the choice for the good of the team, especially with Daniel's sacrifice so recent. He and Wesley would be great together as friends, both outsiders to the military personal, for different reasons, and Jonas would likely be more open to Wesley's supernatural past than any of the others in the SGC. I can't wait till he starts demonstrating magic for Major Carter :) Not right away of course, the trust between them is too fragile for that. I hope you can continue to progress this story, you write it very well.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from FireWolfe
Review:
I like this.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from LetsRandom
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I really enjoyed this. Well written and a good read.
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from RevDorothyL
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Oh, very cool! O'Neill recognizing in Wesley something very similar to his own traumatized and guilt-ridden state when he went to Abydos, and Jonas making the altruistic, greater-good choice to welcome rather than try to warn off Wesley . . . ? Wonderful stuff, and demonstrating your grasp of the best aspects of their characters.

Wesley and Jonas as friends? I very much want to see more of that. It has the seeds of greatness in it!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from RafMereC
Review:
Very nice.

I wouldn't mind seeing this story developed further.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
So nice how Jonas and Wes were able to bond like that. Have to say, hope it isn't another four years before you add to this series. I'm enjoying it immensely.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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I really love this series. Wesley leaving LA for new adventures. \0/
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Fantastic series, I hope you continue it as it is brilliant.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from MarcusSLazarus
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Sucks a bit that Wesley's leaving L.A. with his relationship with the rest of the Angel Investigations team in this condition, of course, but with the potential for seeing how SG-1 operates with HIM as their linguist- coupled with the fact that just him leaving doesn't negate the possibility that he could be persuaded to go back later on-, I'm DEFINITELY interested in seeing how this story progresses...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from tealruby
Review:
Well done, this is a nice series. Please continue!
Review By [tealruby] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Small Steps" from Marcel
Review:
I'll second Marcus' review... great story, but it definitely begs to be continued :)
Review By [Marcel] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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