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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Tsita
Why do I think I know where Quentin went off to?
Comments from author:
I don't know, because I made it really obvious? :P
Review By [Tsita] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JediKnight
Good job on the update, I hope you will be adding more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FireWolfe
Great chapter. I look forward to seeing more. I think Tommy Boy will be upset when he learns his loyal death eaters dropped his girl in a portal. I so would not want to be the one who did that.
More soon I hope.
Comments from author:
But they weren't Death Eaters yet. Just people who shared is supposed vision that Muggles were dirty and disgusting and should be eradicated. But yeah, he's not going to be happy.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
happy to see this new chapter. I enjoyed it a lot except for one thing, it seemed to me that everyone was being very rude to Dumbledore. I thought Buffy would be more happy to see him. Just "what are you doing here?" and no "it is good to see you." Also, she didn't introduce him to Dawn or Giles. Just a little constructive criticism, aside from that it was very good. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Dumbledore's been watching Buffy for at least a couple of years - he knew who they were. Buffy was in shock, and when people get a shock sometimes manners get thrown out the window. I'll have to tweak Chapter 4 to address that, but thank you for pointing it out.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [3 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pureevil
wow. its a shame she got taken away from where she was happy and that tom became the evil wizard version of hitler..stupid malfoy. wonder what happend to quinten...always thought maybe he was a young quinten travers since he was all into vampires and demons and stuff that maybe he became a watcher/head watcher. wonder what will happen when buffy goes back? maybe she can change tom again. can't wait for more, update soon please!
Comments from author:
Everyone seems to think that Quentin Trimble turns into Quentin Travers. It definitely wasn't my intention to make it seem that way, and his current identity will be revealed in Chapter 3, although there's a huge, glaring neon sign of a hint at the end of Chapter 2, which is currently posted.
Review By [pureevil] • Date [3 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winnie
had a feeling who Prof Giles was

another good story...looking forward to the next chapters
Comments from author:
Edna Giles is actually a canon character, and she's Giles' grandmother. You should go check out the new chapter, which I posted last night :P
Review By [winnie] • Date [2 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PowerStealerRogue
Good start to the sequel. Why couldn't Giles go with them? And how did Buffy know Dumbledore was the head master at the school? Can't wait to see Minerva and Buffy react to each other.
Your loyal fan
Comments from author:
Giles needs to stay and help with the Council, although there should be a Scooby reunion sometime in the not so distant future.
Review By [PowerStealerRogue] • Date [29 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadohime
Ah...Book 5, I loathe you so...

Ahem. Anyway, this is a great start to the new story, and it looks like a big one. Now, the question is, are you going for Mischief-Maker!Dawn, or some other archetype? If it's Mischief-Maker, I can't wait for her to meet the Weasley twins.

Keep up the good work, both here and on Sunnydale Shinigami!
Comments from author:
I'm hoping that making it somewhat AU will make OotP somewhat bearable :P
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [29 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from scarlett
Yay the sequel!! oh I am so excited for this!! Kinda bummed that Buffy is gonna be facing the ex-boyfriend who has turned evil again though. She never gets a break when it comes to the love department. I'm sure Quentin would say 'I-told-you-so' if he would see Buffy again. can't wait for the next chapter :)
Review By [scarlett] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clockworkorange
Ooh, the sequel! Sweetness! I can't wait to see Buffy and Dawn's reaction to the people in the Order and vice versa.
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Very nice start of the sequel, but it seems to start a little too late in "Buffy". I hope you will add more soon.

-I don't see why you made it so that the rest of the Scoobies didn't go with Buffy and Dawn? Xander could have gotten a replacement eye.
Comments from author:
I have my reasons for that. They may make an appearance, later on, but right now they're abroad and have little idea of what Buffy's doing or where she is with Dawn.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ailisande
Yay for sequels!!! I'm so excited...and considering the fact that I just woke up from passing out earlier, that's an achievement ;-). I can't wait to see Buffy's reaction when she finds out that her beau looks more like Michael Jackson Redux than she ever wanted to know...Will Voldy make a run for the Olay Anti-Aging counter when he sees his little blonde looking lovely and dewy as when he last saw her? And since DumbleD obviously kept an eye on Buffy all this time...does Minerva know about her too (I just had a random vision of bespectacled cat attacks for some reason)?
Comments from author:
Passing out? I hope you're okay, passing out is never a good thing. I snickered a little at the Anti-Aging counter comment, although by now Voldemort is a little too far gone to concern himself with human emotions.

Just 'cause Dumbledore kept an eye on her (and it was only for the last couple of years, more on that later) doesn't mean everyone else knows. Next chapter should reveal a little more.
Review By [Ailisande] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Cool beans! The much anticipated sequel. It was quite a good starting chapter. I look forward to more, and to where you'll be taking this story.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Taisy
You have started the sequel! The first chapter was a little light on description and felt a little bit rushed, but I am sure you'll find steady pace once things get going. I'm looking forward to see just how Dumbledore introduces Buffy and her sister and the reactions of everyone.

This should be an intriguing read. Thank you.
Comments from author:
You're welcome! I really hope it lives up to any expectations people have for it.
Review By [Taisy] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
At last the sequel starts. I wonder what's in the extra trunk. Legacy from Giles' grandmother, held until a certain moment arrived? It's going to be interesting to see what Quentin's been up to. Minerva will have a heart attack (the funny kind, not the bad kind) on seeing her. Bet Augusta will be surprised, too.
Voldemort will be the most surprised, though. And Buffy's still got his charm bracelet. That could be very interesting. I wonder if he can sense its presence and/or locate it? He strikes me as the type to add something to any gift like that...
And boy howdy, can't wait for pensieve memories showing Buffy & Tom Riddle kissing etc -would weird out any who saw. Nobody in the current era thinks of Voldemort as human...
Comments from author:
Yep, ol' Voldyshorts is going to be very surprised when he finds his little blonde spitfire is back from whatever happened to her. I can't wait to do the reactions to the penseive memories, and that is one of the things I'm most looking forward to.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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