My heart is breaking for Elladan...and in a short time you've gotten me nice and teary-eyed. Thank you for the lovely, though terribly sad, start to this story.

*sniffles*

Thank you - sorry about the sniffles - I think you'll need your handkerchief in the next chapter, too. There will be a total of three chapters to this.

Eep! You killed Elrohir!
I like it anyway. :)
Is there to be more? I see it's marked incomplete, but it seems as though it could stand alone as is. (Not that I will in any way object if you have more in the works...)

**Eep! You killed Elrohir!**

I know - it was very hard to do. When the story idea came to me I didn't even want to think about it, but it kept nagging me...

This chapter does look like a stand alone - but actually it is the first of three - the other two chapters are written, then I revise them a bit myself, now my beta has looked at the second one and has the third (which basically has 'The End' at the bottom of it) - so definitely 3 chapters and the other two will be here over the next 10 days or so.

Nicely done, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Thank you so much for commenting. I have the whole written, it is just with my beta - so where I go next should be here in a few days...

Oh God.


Coincidence strikes hard. My aunt died last night, and I just started reading this story, and the tears just started flowing.

It was incredibly well-written.

Oh I am sorry for your loss.

This will be three chapters long - they are all written; I think you may need your handkerchief again for chapter two - but chapter three less so.