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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from starshinedown
Review:
My heart is breaking for Elladan...and in a short time you've gotten me nice and teary-eyed. Thank you for the lovely, though terribly sad, start to this story.

*sniffles*
Comments from author:
Thank you - sorry about the sniffles - I think you'll need your handkerchief in the next chapter, too. There will be a total of three chapters to this.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grundy
Review:
Eep! You killed Elrohir!
I like it anyway. :)
Is there to be more? I see it's marked incomplete, but it seems as though it could stand alone as is. (Not that I will in any way object if you have more in the works...)
Comments from author:
**Eep! You killed Elrohir!**

I know - it was very hard to do. When the story idea came to me I didn't even want to think about it, but it kept nagging me...

This chapter does look like a stand alone - but actually it is the first of three - the other two chapters are written, then I revise them a bit myself, now my beta has looked at the second one and has the third (which basically has 'The End' at the bottom of it) - so definitely 3 chapters and the other two will be here over the next 10 days or so.
Review By [grundy] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Nicely done, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for commenting. I have the whole written, it is just with my beta - so where I go next should be here in a few days...
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
Oh God.


Coincidence strikes hard. My aunt died last night, and I just started reading this story, and the tears just started flowing.

It was incredibly well-written.
Comments from author:
Oh I am sorry for your loss.

This will be three chapters long - they are all written; I think you may need your handkerchief again for chapter two - but chapter three less so.
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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